a poem about my father

Jan 28, 2006 00:54

this is a poem i wrote about my father, and i KNO it doesnt rhyme, poetries about more than rhyming ( Read more... )

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pock_marked March 28 2006, 06:26:55 UTC
wow dood that is leik so deep. i h8 it wen ppl just dont understand what its like 2 b traumatised as a child. liek one thyme i stepped on a snale, and mum just laghed, i meen, how the fuk does that mak me feeel? i jus fuken kiled sumthin and mum jus laghes, pppl can be so crul. keep ritin comrade, your wiked ass poems are gonna blow sum ppls mind sum day. they jus dont have the vision yet, you noe what i meen?

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is_it_worth_it7 March 28 2006, 08:58:17 UTC
yeh, and your what? really clever?
pretty hip?
maybe you'd know somethin about the world if you had a life, like, wat, you just do this all day?
GOD! ...
maybe if you werent so negative all the time, and u'd maybe learn something about expression you'd be a more rounded person?
thats wats wrong with the world.

-K

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