am i on the right track?

[iseyce]

the camp was a peaceful place to be. i woke up most mornings when light touched the floor of our valley. my clothes dampened by dew. tera leaning against me.. reading or weaving soft bark into hats or leg guards. things that the others in the camp found quite useful when tromping through the thick brush nearby. the camp was in an excellent spot.

Comments

[robynann]

I like the journal style, but remember not to make it too serious or the apocalypse won't seem fun (which it will be).

[iseyce]

oh, of course it will be!
thats one of my concerns, that i get that across properly