[FIC] One More Try: Chapter 4

[isha_mabin]

Title: One More Try
Author: isha_mabin
Pairing: AKAME, JinxOC
Rating: PG-15 - NC-17
Genre: Romance, AU, Angst
Disclaimer: I only own half of the plot and the original character Stephanie Jones, nothing (and no one) else
Summary: Everything was going well for Kazuya Akanishi. He had an awesome and drop-dead hot (not to mention rich) husband that loves him

Comments

[mae0513]

Thanks for the update~

waiting for more~ ^___________^v

[isha_mabin]

Thanks for reading and commenting! ^^

[masami93]

hello :) I love your fics :) I've actually read "A Whisperer's Love" regularly but it's my first time commenting ;) sorry :D
Anyway! I loved it :)And this one seems interesting as well.
Kame and Jin need better communication skills. Plus, Jin should notice Kazuya's feelings. I mean, c'mon! He's Jin's husband after all! Hope everything will be ok in the end.
Can't wait for next update <3 Write soon, plz :)

[isha_mabin]

Aww, thanks for reading my fics ^^

They really should talk, i agree.

Next chapter is due on sunday ^^

[akame_koi13]

Oh Jin. It's very important making your son happy, but what about your husband?
Sorry for being late ^^" Banned from Internet for two days…

[isha_mabin]

I'm sorry about getting banned from internet. That must have sucked.

Jin does want Kazuya to be happy but he's not a mindreader. He's taking Kazuya's words for it and believes that he's okay, that they are okay

[purikazu]

okay.. the storm is coming...

and, like what, i can blame Koki for getting angry with jin...

uwaahhh... so complicated..
if i was kame, i would be no better than him...

i mean, yes, Eiji is part of Jin's live too..
and, as a lover, kame know too that jin wants kids, and he can't give any.. it's so sad, ne...

but, the romantic scene earlier is nice too.. :-)

ne, i-chan...
i watch, again, your trailer for this fic.. and i can't help but cried, again... T.T
*looking for some tissue*

oh no, i keep rambling unimportant things here...
so, better to stop now..

i'm waiting for the new update, i-chaann... ^_^//

[isha_mabin]

I'm glad someone understands Kame. Its really hard to do what he's doing, placing Jin before himself but then that's what lovers do ne?

I wanted them to have a romantic scene before all that drama so... ^^

Im glad you watched the trailer again. *hands you tissues*

I love reading comments so go ahead and ramble on ^^

[kaze_no_hisui]

kazuya with eiji is so cute ^////^ and i think without stephanie, they will make a happy family :D but eiji's presence can hurt kazuya too >

[isha_mabin]

Kazuya wants to love Eiji like his own son but every time he gets too close to him, he remembers Stephanie.

It's all very complicated *sigh*