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[FIC] One More Try: Chapter 10

Nov 14, 2013 21:06

Title: One More Try
Author: isha_mabin
Pairing: AKAME, JinxOC
Rating: PG-15 - NC-17
Genre: Romance, AU, Angst
Disclaimer: I only own half of the plot and the original character Stephanie Jones, nothing (and no one) else
Summary: Everything was going well for Kazuya Akanishi. He had an awesome and drop-dead hot (not to mention rich) husband that loves him ( Read more... )

fic: one more try

Comments 51

is_kazuchan November 14 2013, 13:27:48 UTC

please don't hurt kame again.... T_T
why why why...
baka jin...

isha_mabin November 14 2013, 16:05:56 UTC

Sorry >.<

Thanks for reading and commenting! ^^

juddyjudd November 14 2013, 13:37:43 UTC

WHAT??? NOOO!!!!! they should try other things before!!!!! kame is so hurt!!! it's not fair!

Jin should think about how he'd feel if Kame was unfaithful to him!

isha_mabin November 14 2013, 16:11:05 UTC

Unfortunately, time is running out and so are their options.

Jin isn't being unfaithful, at least not this time. He doesn't like what's happening and he hates to see Kame hurt but sometimes, life is a bitch.

Thanks for reading and commenting! ^^

pinkporca November 14 2013, 13:58:33 UTC

What a predictament Jin is in: the love for Kazuya and for his son. Unfortunately, the son should take priority. However, I could understand Kazuya's position. Never good situation to be in for anyone. Thanks for the update.

isha_mabin November 14 2013, 16:12:08 UTC

Yep, not a good situation at all >.<

Thanks for reading and commenting! ^^

dilovesyunjae November 14 2013, 14:35:45 UTC

Booooooo to jin. Old mistakes is haunting jin now. I pity his kid. N kazuya, move on!!! Sorry im the kind of person who is abit vindictive.

isha_mabin November 14 2013, 16:15:11 UTC

Hmm, it would be easier I guess for Kame to move on but that's just not the kind of person he is. Besides, you really can't just move on from a marriage of five years. Naturally, he's trying to hold on, especially because he knows that Jin hates the situation as much as Kame does.

Thanks for reading and commenting! ^^

dilovesyunjae November 15 2013, 00:50:03 UTC

Awww I know all that. Just let me rant over how it sucks now for kame, pls? ^^

isha_mabin November 15 2013, 03:08:10 UTC

Oh. Go ahead then. hahaha

vitachao November 14 2013, 14:35:51 UTC

GOD!!!
kame, just fill the divorce paper and run to tatchan...
let him beat the crap out of that doctor...
as stephanie best friend she definetely has different motive other than save eiji!

stupid akanishi!!!

isha_mabin November 14 2013, 16:17:27 UTC

Um, Kame can't just run away to Tat-chan and file a divorce, that would be childish.

Thanks for reading and commenting! ^^

vitachao November 15 2013, 14:53:44 UTC

for me that not a childish thing ( ... )

isha_mabin November 16 2013, 03:55:06 UTC

It's alright. I do appreciate criticisms. It lets me know what I did wrong, even if it hurts. Hmm, maybe I really wasn't able to portray Jin's character right...don't worry, I'll try to improve on him. Thank you for your honest opinion *bows ( ... )

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