Fic: "So The Last Time I Went to the Living World..." Chad/Ishida, Renji, NC-17 (for aizome)

[nehalenia]

Title: “So the Last Time I Went to the Living World…”
Author: nehalenia
For: Birthday fic for the wonderful, creative, fantastic aizome. (And because there just isn’t enough Chad pron in the world.)
Pairing: Chad/Ishida, helpful-voyeur!Renji
Rating: NC-17 (at least)
Warnings: PWP, Renji POV, run-on sentences, weird narrative style which I will

Comments

[kari_izumi]

I think this is my favorite yaoi fic ever. XD Man, oh man this is awesome. Especially the last line! :D

[nehalenia]

Wow, thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!

[shalomdebbie]

Told ya. I think it's one of my favorites ever ever forever too. I can't properly express my love for this fic. It has just the right touches of hotness and humor and innocence and voyeuristic yum. Hit all my kinks, like I told ya in yr LJ--ESPECIALLY the kink for characterization and I can't praise it enough.

I should pull all-nighters writing fic if they come out as good as this! It's been a while since I lunged at one like you did this one. I'm so enormously proud of you, isn't that just like my Jewish Mama self? MY NEHA WROTE THE MOST AWESOMEST PORN, YOU GUYS! <3

[nehalenia]

Hahaahaa! It just shows you how good a judge I am of my own writing. I think I always have doubts about the ones that mix humor and sex because I'm constantly having to rein in the humor a bit or it spoils the mood. Just one of those things that makes me edit and re-edit and re-write and re-edit till I'm ready to tear my hair out.

[freyalilith]

oh...... OOOOHHHHHHH. Holy....ah... brain freeze. Wow, that was so freakin hot!!!!! And I certainly hope you get the next story out!!!!! Cause I could read your fics all day every day. I cant get anything more intelligent out.... haha....

Just wow. (Oh yeah, I loved how you did it in Renji's POV, a really nice touch and I thought it would awsome.)

[nehalenia]

Thanks mucho! I'm glad you enjoyed it and that the POV worked. Yay!

[secila80]

O.O Okay, so I really don't get yaoi (not saying this to be critical, but because I think it sort of emphasies how much I loved this fic) BUT I adore Renji and when I saw that this was from his pov I felt the need to read it because there is just so little fan fic from his pov. . .

I thought your Renji voice was brilliant! I especially love how he kept sort of asking questions at the end of his paragraphs. It felt like such a natural thing for him to do, as it seems like he would be uncomfortable with telling a long narrative and would seek the audience's approval to know he should continue. And then the questions dropped off as he got more into telling the story. Really, really good! His observations and expressions were just soooo in character, imo! (Well, except for me just having a hard time seeing his character in that situation -- eek, sorry, sorry, I'm a loser, I know, I know D:) But, really, I very much enjoyed the fic. Thanks for sharing it!!!

[nehalenia]

Wow, thank you so much for reading and commenting, especially since you're not a yaoi fan. I'm really flattered that you read it and liked Renji's voice. He's a really fun character to write and he ought to be used more. Thanks again!

[ak_bennington]

"Renji-sensi to the rescue" XDDDDD I didn't expect he was going to say something XDD but seriously, Ishida and Chad needed his advice ^^
This reminds me of when people were asking you if Ishida's lover in "Life lessons" was Chad ^^
It was super HOT! *¬* and I've loved some hints about other pairings like Ichigo/Ishida (when Renji said he wouldn't have been surprised if he had found Ishida with Ichigo instead of Chad) or Renji wanting to satisfy Ishida's needs *¬*
"The guy was still sporting the biggest boner I have ever seen. No, not just in the Living World. Soul Society, too. Yeah, including him." I'm curious about who is "him" ^o^
"it takes more than determination to squeeze a size 10 peg into a size 1 hole" XDDDDD that was a very good summary ^o^
Thanks for sharing this ^o^

[nehalenia]

Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed it! Yeah, it was funny when people thought the guy in the IchiIshi fic was Chad, because I had this in the works and I was thinking "OK, THAT isn't Chad, but just be patient." ;)

As for who the "even him" is, well, I decided it would be better not to say. But if you consider that Renji used to be in 11th Div and he's probably sitting around with Ikkaku, Yumi and Iba (who also used to be in 11th Div) and the 11th Div seated officers have probably all been in a public bath together, well, you can narrow down who Renji is *probably* talking about. ;)

woohoo!

[reverseharem888]

Helloooooo awesome:) I just started watching Bleach ( shocking innit? hahaha..I've watched lots of other anime but managed to resist the pull of Bleach until recently)...looked around LiveJournal and found this...I love your writing:)

So engaging, and funny, I think I woke the neighbours laughing (as its now 3.52am..oops) I don't know any Spanish so I googled ,"aguante, querido, solo un poco mas"...and got "Stamina, dear, just a little more". Bwahahahahaha!!!

But Google translate must not be working very well as I got," holds milet" for "aguanta mijo". eh? (though that kinda makes it more funny out of randomness:)

Well done, darlink. I will check out more of your fine works.

Re: woohoo!

[nehalenia]

Thanks so much for the comment. I hope you're enjoying Bleach. I'm still glad I got sucked into it. As fo the Spanish, heh, I guess I should have put translations in. A Mexican friend of mine translated the phrases I wanted. 'Aguante' means 'hold on' (tho she told me afterwards that 'aguanta' is more proper) and mijo is short for 'mi hijo' which is just a term of endearment, usually from a parent to a child or between close friends. Hope that helped. :)