It's rather nice but I personally think maybe Gippal wouldn't have cried. I don't think he knew Yuna enough, and whilst he respected her like the rest of Spira, he wouldn't have cried. However, that is just my opinion.
I think I've read this at Fanfiction, am I right?
I also like how emotion was portrayed in this fic. Please post more! :)
I can definitely see what you are saying. To me, at least, Gippal is an extremely difficult character to write. I dislike seeing stories where it's only "Cid's Girl" this and sarcasm that. But I can agree with you and say I might have been a little to eager to jump at making him slightly more human.
But thanks a ton! That's the sort of review I appreciate!!!! ♥
Woh, that was a great chapter. You really portrayed Rikku well, and I could see all the pain that the characters were showing. I think I'll like the pairings in this story, as I'm often slightly torn between Tuna, Tikku and Rippal.
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I think I've read this at Fanfiction, am I right?
I also like how emotion was portrayed in this fic. Please post more! :)
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I can definitely see what you are saying. To me, at least, Gippal is an extremely difficult character to write. I dislike seeing stories where it's only "Cid's Girl" this and sarcasm that. But I can agree with you and say I might have been a little to eager to jump at making him slightly more human.
But thanks a ton! That's the sort of review I appreciate!!!! ♥
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Write more soon!
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Thank you^^
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