Hi there! I looked for an e-mail address to send this feedback to, but there isn't one on the story and the one on the website looks like a web maintainer's e-mail. I wasn't sure if that would go to you or to someone else, so I found the link to your LJ and am leaving feedback here. :-)
Anyway, I really loved this story! The reactions you wrote for Dorian to killing someone were very well thought out and thorough. Sometimes I think people treat those moments too flippantly, so I really enjoyed seeing it done in more depth.
I also found your Klaus really well balanced (in terms of characterization; goodness knows the man isn't emotionally healthy!). I think his evaluation/explanation of his sex life was perfect for the character we know, and a lot less melodramatic than most people seem to go with, not that I don't enjoy melodrama occasionally. :-)
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Anyway, I really loved this story! The reactions you wrote for Dorian to killing someone were very well thought out and thorough. Sometimes I think people treat those moments too flippantly, so I really enjoyed seeing it done in more depth.
I also found your Klaus really well balanced (in terms of characterization; goodness knows the man isn't emotionally healthy!). I think his evaluation/explanation of his sex life was perfect for the character we know, and a lot less melodramatic than most people seem to go with, not that I don't enjoy melodrama occasionally. :-)
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