Opinions on my exhibition doodles.

[isingelectric]

Comments

[harpen15]

I think if the legs are short, the arms should be a tad shorter. The arms look right with the longer legs.

[boyfrenz]

i like the longer legs better.
with the stumpy legs, it feels like everything is too concentrated in the shoulder area or something.
i don't know. it's hard to explain. it just messes up the balance i think.
for the shoulders, consider making them less round, more angular?
good luck getting into your exhibition!

[isingelectric]

thanks :]

[simplysweet0712]

imho, knowing nothing about art, he looks like he's on stilts with the long legs. and try maybe making the shoulders less broad. i think that'll help even him out. right now, he looks like a linebacker hedgehog, which is fine if that's what you want. :) i just think he'd be cuter if he were less bulky.

[simplysweet0712]

not that its not 325892365326873264 times better than i could ever do.
just so you know.
and i am going to drive to g-ville to see this if you get it. so keep me posted.

[isingelectric]

its weird, because humans have a 3:1 shoulder-to-head ratio. So these are even narrower than they should be but they still look really broad.

[simplysweet0712]

that is weird. i wonder why.

[uponthesky]

I like the longer legs, but maybe just a bit shorter than the sketched long ones... It depends on the look you are going for though. They are both cute! as for the shoulders, stand in front of a mirror and look at your own. Shoulders are really just rounded off 90-degree angles, in essence.

[sareplane]

I think make the legs a LITTLE longer, but not as much as the second one. It's more animal like.

:)