Justprompts Prompt: New

Aug 04, 2008 21:06

Surprisingly, he meets her only by a complete coincidence.

It's never occurred to him in the several months that he's been here that there might be an alternate Donna in this world, and he later thinks that that's a rather stupid thing not to have occurred to him.

I grew out of you. Still, could be worse. )

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not_from_mars August 4 2008, 14:20:33 UTC
This was wonderful. I really love your writing style, and I love getting a look at what life on his side of the Void is like, what it does to him. He's very believable. Great job.

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isntthatwizard August 5 2008, 06:28:25 UTC
Thank you so much.

Take the previous words, repeat until appropriate. And by appropriate, I mean until I can fully express my eternal gratitude and delirious happiness.

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ooc handysparehand August 6 2008, 06:57:18 UTC
Oh, this is very good. I love in the beginning, his whole conflict with that word real. You've also managed to bring this alternate Donna into his world so naturally and beautifully.

He's confused by death, confused by meaning. Confused at identity, because 'Doctor' sounds like a lie and 'John Smith' sounds like a different man entirely. Confused at normality, confused at being normal.

I just love that line. It captures what 10.5 must be going through so well.

This works beautifully. <3 I love it.

p.s. And as far as his identity crisis goes, I mean he even has an identity crisis in the fandom. Find me three people who all call him the exact thing, and I would fall over in shock.

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dtstrainers August 14 2015, 23:54:26 UTC
Your writing is amazing and I'm so happy to have found this. I have to fine one perfect sentence in a work when I read it, and for me, it was this:
He's both elated and... elated.

I hope you wrote more in this vein, as I'm just in love with your John Smith and Donna.

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