justprompts: Tell me a Secret

Aug 31, 2008 18:49

[OOC WARNING: AU, sort of shippy (Duplicate/Rose), very angsty, very dark. Read at your own risk.]

"You can't be here."

"Yet clearly I am. Maybe I just grew out of you telling me what I can be."

Su corazon es mi corazon. )

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ooc: not_from_mars August 31 2008, 12:49:30 UTC
Ohmygod. Ohmygod. I am nothing short of flailing right now. This was brilliant and terrifying and so amazingly well-written.

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Re: ooc: isntthatwizard September 1 2008, 07:04:55 UTC
I am nothing short of flailing about as equally at your comment! It made me happy, yes it did. Thank you so much.

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brigadiertardis August 31 2008, 13:54:31 UTC
Fffffffffffff, ohmygosh. Just ... just ... ohmygosh, reject!Ten. Can't ... stop ... flailing. Can I give him a hug? Please? Oh for the love of God he needs a hug.

ALSO ALSO ALSO! I love this interpretation of reject!Ten. It's different, it's dark, and I love how twisted he is. It made me glee.

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isntthatwizard September 1 2008, 07:09:01 UTC
*uses wibble icon that you can snug* He does need a hug, doesn't he? You just sort of have to hope that you still have all your organs when you pull away.

And thank you so much! Although, it's not really an interpretation, more of too much Wikipedia and "Hey, I should make him go crazy and try to cut out Real!Ten's heart." Totally stole the idea from one of the EDA (Sabbath). *is not original*

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brigadiertardis September 1 2008, 14:14:02 UTC
He totally needs a hug. *HUGGLES HIM* As long as he doesn't take one I need, I'm okay with that.

Pfft, Wiki is so an interpretation. Besides, I rather liked the whole idea. And since I've no previous experience with that EDA, it was original enough for meeeeee. Also, I dunno, I just thought it was pretty fegging awesome, so.

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ooc rude_not_ginger August 31 2008, 15:51:35 UTC
This is absolutely brilliant. Without a doubt, one of the most unique and terrifying visions of the dup!Doc ever.

I. Want. More.

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Re: ooc isntthatwizard September 1 2008, 07:11:55 UTC
Thank ye! I'm not exactly sure how I would add more to this, I ended it where it was so that people could decide whether he did kill Real!Doc, whether the transplant was successful, or he botched it up and killed them both. And honestly, I don't know which one I'd like to go for.

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dameluckypants August 31 2008, 16:37:40 UTC
Wow. That's just amazing and scary and flail-worthy all at once.

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isntthatwizard September 1 2008, 07:15:04 UTC
I'm glad to have induced the reaction of uncontrollable arms in so many people.

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dameluckypants September 1 2008, 07:16:10 UTC
It's something to be proud of.

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isntthatwizard September 1 2008, 07:25:14 UTC
And I am proud! So proud that I'm thinking of pinning all you peoples' arms on a bulletin board like a ribbons!

This is not doing anything in my attempt to sound not-creepy, is it?

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ooc handysparehand August 31 2008, 18:18:34 UTC
.......ohmygod!

This....just....I'm speechless. This is nothing short of absolutely amazing! This is just haunting and amazing and the imagery. I can't even think of the words to describe this, just...wow.

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Re: ooc isntthatwizard September 1 2008, 07:20:46 UTC
I wasn't even aware there was imagery! It was intended for a sort of stream-of-consciousness piece. Or something. What was I writing? I have no idea. Who am I? Why is the sky blue?

I am glad to have stripped you of your words.

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Re: ooc handysparehand September 1 2008, 07:27:15 UTC
Just the scene of him tearing the room apart, that I think was a big part of the imagery thing for me. Just that ripped wall paper, and the entire room torn apart. The image really stuck with me.

But yes. Words? What are these things? Strings of thought? Me? Incapable of after reading this story.

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Re: ooc isntthatwizard September 1 2008, 07:34:39 UTC
Yeeaaaaah.... Dup!Doc needs some happy pills. No, wait, they tried that. I'm glad I could get some sort of imagery across, I really didn't do much with descriptions of surroundings. I think that ripped wallpaper line was the only thing outside of his head?

Eee! Your compliments though! They make me squee inside.

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