The Best Man and His Lover [Chapter 1]

[istahire]

 

Comments

[randrews25]

WOW! 0.0
I've never read anything other than viewfinder
but i must admit, this is GREAT!
mind you i don't recognize some terms i realise would be a part of the anime itself:P
but I can't deny its HOT! going to read the rest now :)

[istahire]

Wow I feel so honoured this is the first fanfic you read outside of the VF fandom! ^__________^

When I read over it now I realise there are some very anime specific terms m(_ _)m I hope they weren't too confusing ^_^U

[mitsu_syusuke]

this is great!
but aren't they were perpared to go out?
they are late! gonna find out what happen after this! *runs to read the 2nd chapter*

[yawns_widely]

This is very hot. I like how they undress and I love that Renji doesn't bother with the last two buttons -- it seems so like him, and I can appreciate his haste given the object of his lust. Mmm *drools*