Yay putting writing on the internet!

Mar 13, 2004 13:08

Here you go Alex. Let me know what you think ( Read more... )

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- alex, too lazy to sign in anonymous March 13 2004, 14:09:03 UTC
I dig.

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hey poopface anonymous March 28 2004, 09:20:16 UTC
dude tori get over yourself. you wrote that in 7th grade slash we wrote it and it was ok but the only way you'll get better is if you WRITE SOMETHING ELSE. silver dolphins streaking through shiny waves is great and all but what else do you have in the crazy puple brain of yours you silly octopus. the revisions are good but would be better used if put to some thing new. write what you think not what you've been taught to think you hampster-elderberry progeny! -liz

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Re: hey poopface it_all_depends March 28 2004, 18:10:04 UTC
fuck you! it's the only thing i've written that i actually like and in case you haven't noticed i'm not as good at anything as you are. there's nothing for me to get over, because i'm not taking pride in that shit. i though he might enjoy the piece... and i definetly was writing what i thought. i know it's hard but try not to make me feel like shit.

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