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iteatsblood

kitten gloves - short story/part three

Sep 13, 2008 02:38

Title: Kitten-gloves

Author: Nihilism

Rating: Mild. More angst, some fluff.

Summary: Now that that's decided, Leech goes all out with the reminiscing. Let's talk about feelings. I hate summaries right now. Part 3 of the Warehouse series.

Notes: Dialogue-heavy. All characters depicted are original.. And this was written in dedication to my ( Read more... )

leech/ruckus, original, short story

Comments 4

lemursexbot September 14 2008, 21:57:19 UTC

OOO, I think this is very good. Please keep it going.

I like that Lee(ch) left his aunt's to be with Ruckus, that's very romantic. But I somehow think there's more to his story than what he's telling Ruckus, maybe even more than what he's telling himself.

But I really like the conflict of the younger man romanticizing life on the street and the older one trying to deal with it and reality at the same time. Hopefully they'll both help each other eventually.

iteatsblood September 16 2008, 06:12:21 UTC

Thanks very much! You've definitely grasped the duplicity of Leech and Ruckus both living the same lifestyle, but from very different vantage points. It's a bit difficult to keep up, so I'm glad it's been worth it.

imamirage September 15 2008, 18:31:26 UTC

no, no don't give up! The cute fluff at the end is to die for :) let's see... you've got some really amazing one liners like " Little surprises Leech about this man, but the second he starts acting normal all bets are off." That made me laugh because it was kind of flippant and not really somewhere you'd expect to laugh. Like funny moments at funerals. Inappropriate places =x "...the rhythmic tattoo of the man's heart... " is really good. I like that phrase. It's very different ( ... )

iteatsblood September 16 2008, 06:14:55 UTC

Hmm, not a bad idea - delving further into Leech's past and the way he's lived since his mom died (which really started him on this whole decline.) I'll have to keep that in mind when I start the next section. Thanks for the input.

Right now, I'm working on a couple other stories that involve Leech but that aren't related to this universe. They're more for my own amusement than anything else, so I doubt if they'll get posted.