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Nov 27, 2007 20:02



I made this in dedication to the Bella to my Jacob. It was originally supposed to just be about Jacob, but really, who is he without Bella?


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hopeiforgot November 28 2007, 03:23:15 UTC
gfkhgkjdhfkj <--- incoherency!

there is major LOVE i am passing from me to you at this moment. you have BLOWN me out of the water with this. thank you so so so so so *continues to be repetitive* much. so much. it's BEAUTIFUL.

i am going to reread this when i wake up and freak out to the maximum when i have the energy to bounce up and down on my bed.

it is a good thing i reread my comments before i post them. WOOT for being up for 21 hours and the typos that come out of it!!1!

BELLA/JACOB FTW.

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ithinkiwinzall November 28 2007, 03:30:53 UTC
YOU SO SWEET, DARLIN'.

J/B wins, obviously, and I'm glad you like the drabbles. I'm not fic writer, but you wrote me something so I wrote you something. Only fair.

NOW GO SLEEP OR SOMETHING BEFORE YOU PASS OUT AND I HAVE TO EXPLAIN TO FACETS THAT I LET YOU COLLAPSE.

*makes out with*

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fifthofdecember November 28 2007, 03:33:51 UTC
:O -> literally. that's so what i would look like, you kknow, if i looked like a smilie.

Favorite parts:

"There's not need for territories or watches but he stays. If he crosses it and goes to her and the whole point is lost.

He just wished he knew what that point was."

"There's a tearing sensation somewhere inside of his heart. He know that can't be right, though, because she took it with her"

""I can live enough for both of us." He's begging, but pride has never entered the equation of BellaandJacob. "

you are amazing, honestly. this was such a good work. i really liked the bit at the top, too (though - okay - it's not part of the story). True, true. What is Jacob without Bella.

(btw- do you mind if I add you to my flist? I don't want to miss any new writing of yours. [:)

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ithinkiwinzall November 28 2007, 03:39:33 UTC
Oh, you picked my favorite part, too. Thanks so much for the comment, I really appreciate it.

I actually haven't written anything else, but sure, you can add me and I'll add you back! There might be some other J/B works written.

P.S. EVEN THOUGH I DON'T COMMENT I'VE READ SOME OF YOUR J/B (I know I'm so horrible D: ) That's why your comments make my heart go all fluttery.

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fifthofdecember November 28 2007, 04:26:43 UTC
hahaha.
:D
i'm flattered.

btw - added

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ithinkiwinzall November 28 2007, 04:37:47 UTC
Added back, thanks!

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ithinkiwinzall November 28 2007, 03:40:13 UTC
WOAH. Totally posting, like right now.

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edwardscupcake November 28 2007, 03:51:03 UTC
Wow! This is amazing!
It's so argfja;rkljf;ajrf (my loss of words!)

This is my favorite line: "I can live enough for both of us." He's begging, but pride has never entered the equation of BellaandJacob. "But I can't live enough for you and Edward and Jacob." He doesn't flinch over that name anymore.

Excellent job!

Do you mind if I friend you? I don't want to miss out on any of your writing!! :P

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ithinkiwinzall November 28 2007, 03:53:40 UTC
Thank you so much for the comment! I'm glad you enjoyed my attempt at fanfiction.

I don't actually write all that often, but of course you can friend me. I'll be happy to friend you back.

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edwardscupcake November 29 2007, 02:26:35 UTC
Does that mean that you haven't written anything else? *shrugs* Doesn't matter, I'll be looking forward for more great fics!

Oh, and you've been added. :P

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placebetween November 28 2007, 04:11:00 UTC
asdkf;adjkfdaklgh;adkljfdka;ljfkd;lasjf;kldajs;lkfjdas;lj;a
this is not an attempt at fic, this is one of the better Jacob/Bella fics I have ever read.
sooo good that I can't even use proper sentences. I know how annoying that is. ugh beautiful.

and are the songs available for download somewhere?

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ithinkiwinzall November 28 2007, 04:17:32 UTC
:O INCOHERENCY MAKES MY INSIDES ALL WARM. You learn new things every day.

Thank you for your comment!

Actually, I haven't put the songs up for download because I don't know how. D: iTunes should carry everything, and if you just want to listen I can put up links to youtube videos with the songs?

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placebetween November 28 2007, 04:20:02 UTC
usually people put up zip files with the songs for fanmixes, just because people are more likely to listen to them that way. I'm definitely going to go hunting for them now though.

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ithinkiwinzall November 28 2007, 04:31:08 UTC
Thanks for that. I'm putting what I have together, but a lot of it is just what I've heard on the radio. I'll probably put up some .zip files for what I do have some time tonight or tomorrow.

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