Michael's First Time - Part Two

[its_chase]

Title: Michael's First Time
Author: Chase
Category: Pre-series, AU
Pairing: Michael/Veronica
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I own nothing, still.
Summary: Michael's first sexual encounter. Part Two, written for chanchito, the lovely birthday girl who had to *twist* my arm for this continuation. =]

“Uh, V?” Michael asked hesitantly, the covers on the bed

Comments

[etherealflaim]

“No, not because of you, Veronica. You’re… amazing. You’re beautiful. Smart. Charming… I was gonna say faithful…”

ROFL! YES! Go Michael! I can sooo see him saying that... That's such a burn, I laughed out loud. Love what you did with this second part of the story! I only hope what she told Lincoln had nothing to do with Michael.... Wouldn't want that pretty little boy getting beat up by his brother any more than he already has >=)
~EF

[its_chase]

LOL, I didn't even make the connection that it sounded like something he'd really say. I seem to write this story when I'm extremely tired.

But now, I'm kind of curious as to what would happen in chapter three.

Thank you for yet another review! =]

[tuesdaeschild]

I'd have somehow expected that shy Michael would have had trouble maintaining his erection and resorted to counting dots on the ceiling! Soooo Michael!

And I love that Michael really dotes on Vee and tells her how he sees her! So sweet!

And I'm curious! What does Vee need to tell...well, I'm guessing it's Lincoln! And why would she need Michael there? Surely she's not going to tell Linc she just seduced his little brother! Is she?!! No, no, she wouldn't do that. Would she?!!

[its_chase]

LOL, I always figured that Virgin!Michael would have a bit of trouble with his erection, and while I was leaning back, thinking of what to write, I ended up counting the dots on my ceiling. I tried to mix it up a little, part of him being the sweet brutal honesty, and the other part being the reality brutal honesty..if that made sense, which I doubt.

Haha, and now you, my dear, have me itching to write the third chapter. Damn you! No, seriously, damn you. =) I still haven't slept. Although, judging by my track record, I only write updates for this when I'm tired as hell.

Maybe Vee is gonna show her true colors in the update ;)

[tuesdaeschild]

I love that you included what you were doing in the fic! And yes, it did make sense!

Haha, and now you, my dear, have me itching to write the third chapter. Damn you! No, seriously, damn you. =)

Sorry. *feels guilty*

Maybe Vee is gonna show her true colors in the update ;)

That sounds good to me! ;)

[uvercy]

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