just like that

[eve_n_furter]

I was reading happily along, ignoring the occasional spelling error and general "it doesn't work like that", like I usually do when reading fairly interesting smut. But then...

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[ayumidah]

Well. Isn't THAT a sexy thing to imagine? LOL.

[eve_n_furter]

Exactly. It's the image that immediately springs to mind - NOT!

[rose_cat]

Oh, BLEURGH. (I was laughing at the rest of it, but that brought me up short.)

[eve_n_furter]

Yes, the whole thing is pretty far out there, but this particular imagery... Send me the brain bleach, please?

[rose_cat]

Sorry, I just used it up :p

[pathology_doc]

like the menstrual cycles of close women.

I've heard that this happens, but it seems a bizarre metaphor (to say the least) to choose when describing penis-penetrative sex, of any orifice.

[eve_n_furter]

It's so bizarre that it makes me wonder what made that exact metaphor leap to the author's mind in the first place. Got to be a story there.