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Oct 13, 2010 18:37

So, a while back I started working on this. And now it's finished. HUZZAH.

Title: Second Chances
Pairing: Chansung/Junho
Summary: It's something like a second chance when Junho runs into Chansung. Future!fic, hints at Chanwoo and one-sided!Khunyoung ( Read more... )

my fic (surprise i wrote something)

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sweetshisus October 14 2010, 00:25:14 UTC
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So when I first read this line, I wasn't sure I wanted to read any further.
Basically, the premise is that in 2012 2PM breaks up.
BUT I DID AND I AM SO GLAD I DID. Can I ask what Taec's job was? I mean, the only one who we figure out has a job is Junho. Wat.
BUT OMG CHANHO IS THE PRESHEST THING EVER AND MY HEART JUST EXPLODED INTO A BILLION PIECES. IT WAS SO CUTE. n________________________n

I don't mean to nitpick now, and you can totally ignore this tiny section of the comment, but when you write dialogue, it might be better if you skipped paragraphs when the person who's talking has changed. It makes the flow better, because I spent a few minutes being confused as to who was talking where. Also, differentiate because you have two males and you use he interchangeably and it gets convoluted. SORRY TO BE A NITPICKY BITCH ;________________;

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its_not_wrong October 14 2010, 00:42:12 UTC
It's okay b/c I didn't deal with the actual break up yeaaah! :D

Taec continued on with MCing and acting, maybe he did some other variety shows. Basically he stayed in the business just not as a singer. ^^ That's why he had a schedule haha.

I AM SO GLAD B/C I LOVE FLUFF AND STUFF. AND YES CHANHO OMG.

LOL it's okay, I've become lazy with my dialogue, srsly. I used to like, skip to a new paragraph with each person change and use commas and be all proper with the "...," said etc.

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sweetshisus October 14 2010, 00:48:12 UTC
True, and you added Jay ^___^
omg, I can totally imagine him doing that, ngl. That seems like the perfect post-kpop route for him.

IT WAS SO CUTE. I wanted more sex tho :P

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its_not_wrong October 14 2010, 02:09:35 UTC
Jaaaaaaaaaaaaay. LOL, I think IRL they have to reunite by then. I won't give up faith in that at least. ;o;

Haha, maybe one day I'll write some chanho porn oh yeaaaah.

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691979082 October 14 2010, 18:55:52 UTC
Hi, I'm chananacreampie from twitter. :3 Another one of our twitter friends linked me here.

This was so awesome and the end made me cry. And the way you write Chansung just makes me skdfhdskhfdslghlfsghjlajfsan SO ADORABLE. ♥♥♥

Can we be LJ friends now? Even though my LJ is boring and I only check it like once a week. >_>

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its_not_wrong October 14 2010, 19:29:09 UTC
OH yes yes yes I've added you! :)

;o; Thank you! Chansung will always be adorable maknae obviously even when he's old haha. I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT. AND ESPECIALLY THE END. :D

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691979082 October 14 2010, 20:27:14 UTC
Thank you! ^____^

He is/will be! He's just like an overgrown puppy. LOL.

It was the perfect ending. TwT My insides just turned to mush. *keysmashkeysmash*

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kanashimi_desu November 6 2010, 20:11:53 UTC
Omg I loved it~
I'm so glad I read it~ its my midnight story for tonight xD thanks a lot u should write more and more chanho :3
Xoxo

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its_not_wrong November 9 2010, 20:37:43 UTC
Oh thank you thank you~!!!

Haha I want to write more Chanho! I actually just want to write more 2pm! Ahhhhh, need to find time.

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