Jealousy

Sep 22, 2011 22:19

Title: Jealousy
Pairing: OnHo (top!onew)
Rating: NC-17 (PWP)
Warning: Super dominant Onew. If that bugs you, don't read it. And this is PWP. Serious PWP
A/N: This is for lefty_215. Sorry it took me so long :( real life gets in the way. I wish I could sit on my computer all day and write yaoi smut but i cant, sadly hahaha. Anyways, hope you like this bb~~ sorry ( Read more... )

request fic, fandom: shinee, pairing: onho, rating: nc-17

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kiyabaybee September 23 2011, 22:53:16 UTC
I'll be back...

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itsasecretx3 September 23 2011, 23:01:09 UTC
^^~

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kiyabaybee September 24 2011, 23:04:14 UTC
This reminds me of an Onkey I read with Key getting jealous cause of Onew talking to other people
Ok I'm not really into OnHo or bottom Minho but THIS well what can I say lol you worked it
I wouldn't have read it but I miss your work so I put my feelings aside
Really the sex on the kitchen table as hot as that sounds is worst than the couch cause like people sit to eat there so I'm on Onew's side
The whole spilling of the milk thing lol what a bad influence Onew is
At the end of the day Minho needs to keep hyung whoring cause Onew likes him tryna make him jealous and Minho gets that treatment so it's a win win at the end of the day

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itsasecretx3 September 25 2011, 02:24:28 UTC
Haha I think I love you <3 thank you for this long comment ^^

It's weird I never liked bottom!minho either at first but it kInda grew on me ^^ mostly because I'm a perv (obviously) and think Minho would look really good all stretched out under onew. Because he's so long and limby hahaha.

Anyways, thank you for reading and commenting! <3333

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kiyabaybee September 25 2011, 10:17:20 UTC
:D
With me it's cause of his long limbs & that which makes bottom Minho odd for me but then he seems so sweet & caring that personality wise I think yeah he would bottom, then there's his competitive side I'm just like... It's confusing
I didn't actually realise the length of my comment
& I'm gonna stop cause I didn't request this lol

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itsasecretx3 September 25 2011, 10:20:22 UTC
But I like your long comments hahaha. Yeah that's how it was for me too and now I don't have a problem either way. I like writing top and dominant Minho because it's easier for me but sometimes I get so into bottom Minho hahahah. It's weird like that. I'm a weird ass writer when it comes to that xD

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kiyabaybee September 25 2011, 10:33:02 UTC
Ok then but I normally comment before I sleep so I forget everything I want to put so it would be longer if I didn't do that
I'm not a writter but I like sweet Minho then bam he's dominant in the bedroom for fics but then sweet Minho in the bedroom works too so I dunno

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itsasecretx3 September 25 2011, 10:35:45 UTC
I'm so Minho biased haha Minho and Jonghyun. They were my first and staple shinee biases. Minho is so precious <3 I want him in every fic hahaha

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lefty_215 September 26 2011, 00:53:26 UTC
SORRY I'M LAAATE. D:

THIS WAS AWESOME. Yes~ Dominating Onew FTW. UNF. Minho, Onew sees what you're trying to do. XDD

Never die, small bottom!Minho fandom... Never die. ;~;

Thank you~ I appreciate you willing to do this for me. <333

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itsasecretx3 September 26 2011, 01:44:07 UTC
Kekekeke its okay!!! I'm glad you liked it <3 btw, theres and fyeahbottomminho on tumblr ^_~ I've seen fics on there. If you didn't know about it you should check ~! there will always be a bottom!Minho!! Hahahaha

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lefty_215 September 26 2011, 02:34:58 UTC
Oh yes, do write more. <33

OH. LOL A friend made that and I kinda run it... XDDD

I shall be reccing your stuff at some point, if that's okay with you?

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itsasecretx3 September 26 2011, 02:59:03 UTC
Omg I think I just died hahahahaha I accidentally stumbled across it and didn't really get too far into it and bookmarked it to look at it later xD omg how funny. Now I'm embarrassed hahahaha.

I'd love to have my fics recced ^^ <33

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sadistic_shawol September 28 2011, 00:54:47 UTC
HOTNESS! I just discovered your journal so..brb *off to read more smutty goodness* >:D

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itsasecretx3 September 28 2011, 03:22:57 UTC
^3^ i hope you enjoy it~

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