The Wind Beneath My Wings

Jan 08, 2019 21:31

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It’s turned into yet another one of those nights ( Read more... )

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wantedonvoyage January 8 2019, 22:22:31 UTC
Very good. I have known all the characters in that story at one point or other.

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itsjustc January 8 2019, 22:53:12 UTC
Thank you x
I hoped that people would be able to relate to the various characters in the story, and hoped that their personalities might be recognised as people we have known at some point in our lives.

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majesticzaichik January 9 2019, 00:00:17 UTC
Interesting... it sounds like neither of them knew just how jealous the other one was of them.

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itsjustc January 10 2019, 21:35:16 UTC
Yes....that was one of the main things that struck me about my real friends' friendship! as the 3rd friend I think I could see it a lot clearer than they ever could.

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meridian_rose January 9 2019, 15:34:37 UTC
Oh a great twist, them jealous of each other!

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itsjustc January 10 2019, 21:38:50 UTC
Thank you. I hoped to write it in a way that the realization surprised the both of them. But then life goes on in the same way as it always did.

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anonymous January 9 2019, 18:35:14 UTC
Wonderful! This, sadly, so often happens with sisters. I hated being an only child but I was always grateful I never had a sister. It usually starts with a mother who plays them off against each other. I've known at least two pairs like that.

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itsjustc January 10 2019, 21:44:46 UTC
Thank you x

I actually have a much younger sister who is 9 years younger than me. Growing up she was also a lot like my Izzy character but as I was much older and very much an arty extrovert (in a quietly confident way) our relationship wasn't anything like these two in my story. We were always very different personalities and at times it was hard but we were like cats....we lived separate lives most of the time, but god help the person who spoke a bad word to either of us about the other sister!!

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st_martin_a January 9 2019, 19:00:45 UTC
Very good.
To start with I thought it was a regular post. Lol
You capture well, the experience of feeling lonely in a lively pub.
I was captivated from beginning to end.

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itsjustc January 10 2019, 21:49:48 UTC
Thank you for reading it as I know it wasn't my usual sort of post xxx

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