i love how you captured jin's state - the high and low, lucid yet surreal. love the push and pull of his internal contradiction vis a vis kame. and, of course, i love kame - that he didn't say much but just stares most of the time. yep, sweetP, me loves the angst that just teeters on the edge and doesn't go overboard. you definitely have a way with writing in a tone that stings just a bit but stings nonetheless.
then again it's akame and smut and you so even if it sucked, i'm gonna love it. good thing it doesn't because i really don't like lying :)
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and i just love you to bits ♥
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i love how you captured jin's state - the high and low, lucid yet surreal. love the push and pull of his internal contradiction vis a vis kame. and, of course, i love kame - that he didn't say much but just stares most of the time. yep, sweetP, me loves the angst that just teeters on the edge and doesn't go overboard. you definitely have a way with writing in a tone that stings just a bit but stings nonetheless.
then again it's akame and smut and you so even if it sucked, i'm gonna love it. good thing it doesn't because i really don't like lying :)
♥Ashi
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reading this was just... i don't know what to say except that i loved it. i like seeing Jin suffer in fics, too
sorry my comment is incoherent. but i hope i get the message across. this is one of the best fics i've ever read.
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