slippage. harry/louis, nc-17.

[likecharity]

Title: slippage
Author: likecharity
Pairing: Harry/Louis, with OT5 undertones
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Exhibitionism or open voyeurism or something
Summary: Harry and Louis have sex in front of the others. It shouldn't be like this. They shouldn't be so comfortable with each other that something like this is allowed to happen without anyone

Comments

[the_crazy_freak]

I've actually been avoiding some of the more explicit fics, just because I generally like to start with the PG stuff and then gradually move up. But I dunno, because I love your Liam POV fic so much and this sounded kinda interesting, I decided to give it a go. I was a bit sceptical at first, because, not gonna lie, I feel that sex is a private thing that should only be shared by the people actually having sex (might have something to do with the fact that I would personally feel very uncomfortable if someone watched me and my SO doing it). Plus, I also thought it can't possibly be very realistic that the other guys would just watch them go at it.

But boy was I wrong! For some reason, I was really captivated by this and enjoyed it too much for my own good. And it actually was pretty realistic too. It probably helped that you wrote this from all of the guys' POVs too - so we could see just what they were thinking and feeling. Which I absolutely love! I always enjoy the smut more if there are some deeper inner thoughts and/or emotions

[likecharity]

It really means a lot that you ended up liking this despite not thinking you would. I mean, I write and read a lot of porn, but it is really important to me that it's realistic - I couldn't have written this with everyone just being like "oh yeah cool this is all totally fine" and immediately like, jacking off to it or anything. That just didn't feel right to me. Deeper inner thoughts and emotions are important!

I'm glad you liked Zayn because I think I struggled the most with him. And embarrassed!Liam is my favourite. ♥ Thanks so much!

[acidwashjeans21]

Wow I don't know how you did it but this was both hot and sweet in a weird sort of awkward way. Great job, I'm loving your stories!

[likecharity]

Lol, thank you! I'm glad you liked. :)

[solaflora]

I am completely stunned. There are not enough words to describe how much I loved this. The way you wrote their relationship dynamics was spot on and it was soo hot, yet hilarious at the same time. The whole things just seemed to flow perfectly together. This was- wow.

[likecharity]

Wow, thank you so so much!! ♥ I'm really glad you liked it and that it seemed like them to you. :)

[likecharity]

Oh god, this does not seem like a good story to read if you get secondhand embarrassment from fic!! Though I did try to make them all get more comfortable with it at the end so hopefully it wasn't too awful? I'm glad you enjoyed it despite that, anyway, thank you. XD

[mechanicalrain9]

Oh wow. So very hot. I love exhibitionism/voyeurism, and I loved how you included all the boys and their reactions in this. They sounded very much like I'd imagine they would. I think I'll stay up too late today reading all your fic now that I finally got started. :D

[likecharity]

Yay thank you!! I'm really glad you liked this, and especially pleased that their voices sounded right. ♥