it's you i want to take apart. harry/louis, nc-17.

[likecharity]

Title: it's you i want to take apart
Author: likecharity
Pairing: Harry/Louis
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Cross-dressing (make-up and underwear), facial, unprotected sex...mentions of bullying?
Summary: He will readily admit that he likes to make Harry squirm sometimes, but this actually isn't about that-he just wants to help him get past whatever

Comments

[rubybruiseday]

Ohmygodohmygod.

Your writing is exquisite, first off.

Fuck. I am speechless. Harry wearing makeup is just perfect and so hot and JESUS CHRIST I can't form sentences right now but thank you.

[likecharity]

Thank you so so much!! ♥

[likecharity]

Yaaay, thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. ♥

[slothy_girl]

im glad you're not expecting smart or clever reviews because i can't honestly think of anything other than "oh fuck that was awesome" lol Your writing is so flawless and as soon as I see you've written something, I drop EVERYTHING just to read it XD You're positively amazing darling :D and im so thankful to have you writing in this fandom :)

[likecharity]

Thank you so much!! ♥ I'm really glad you liked it, and that you like my writing in general.

[slothy_girl]

You make it very easy to fall in love with your works :) cant wait for whatever else you decide to write up!

[likecharity]

I've still got a stupid number of ideas but now that I've got a bunch of porn out of my system, I'm going to focus on a really long, plotty, angsty coming out fic. Even though writing it is like tearing my heart into pieces. :(

[thatshorrific]

This is great. I've only ever been peripherally interested in crossdressing, but the way you write it really allows me to appreciate it as a kink. It's like, it's not just smut, it's like a really good exploration of the kink, and of their relationship. I love how seriously and sensitively Louis tries to handle the lipstick issue, despite how much he wants it. The interaction between him and Harry is really just amazing.

Harry says nothing for a long moment, snapping off the cap and winding the lipstick up a little, looking at it. "Actually," he says, "I just thought-if you wanted to, you could put it on me again."

"No," says Louis quickly, even though a fairly large part of him is saying yes, god, please. "No, it's okay Haz, really. We can just forget about it, I don't mind."

"No, I meant-" Harry frowns to himself, and then slips onto the sofa beside Louis, holding out the tube. "I meant, like. I want you to."That bit especially just killed me dead. I just love the delicacy in how you handled it, and how the overarching sensuality

[likecharity]

This is such an awesome comment, it's not creepy or stalkery at all! Thank you so much for this. Dialogue and characterisation are SO important to me, so I'm really glad that the way I write them works for you. I guess it's just really important to me for things to be as believable as possible, so if the dialogue sounds unnatural or the interaction is off somehow then it's just not right. I'm really glad that this made you appreciate the kink a little more, and that you liked the story in general. ♥

[badjujuboo]

*KEYPOUND SMAAAAAAAAAAAASHHHHHHHH*
CANNOT LEAVE COHERENT COMMENT BECAUSE THE ULTIMATE IN PORNYNESS HAS KEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEED MEEEEEEEEEEEEE

[likecharity]

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