horizontal like a quarter to three. harry/louis, nc-17.

May 25, 2012 16:39

Title: horizontal like a quarter to three
Author: likecharity
Pairing: Harry/Louis
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Oh, god. Rough sex that is slightly D/s-y, unprotected sex, facefucking, breathplay, comeplay (including a facial), rimming, some pretty serious overstimulation, and a very brief mention of spanking. (Also Harry is seventeen.)
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kink: overstimulation, kink: d/s, kink: rough sex, words: 5-10k, kink: comeplay, rating: nc-17, pairing: harry/louis, kink: breathplay, kink: rimming

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ologist May 25 2012, 16:13:41 UTC
Wow. That was something I didn't realise I wanted. Loved it!

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likecharity May 25 2012, 17:33:40 UTC
Yayy! Thank you. :D

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reeround May 25 2012, 16:23:35 UTC
Oh

my

God.

At first glance it's a PWP, except it's not porn without plot because the porn is the plot and oh, just, fuck you, fuck you and the words you rode in on because this is too good.

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likecharity May 25 2012, 17:36:02 UTC
Eeee thank you so much! This felt like one of the more PWP-y things I've written just because so MUCH of it is porn, but I did want there to be some plot and feelings under it all. I'm really glad you liked it. (At least that's what I'm choosing to take from the 'fuck you' hahaha.)

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reeround May 25 2012, 17:39:32 UTC
I was talking to someone once about writing porn (as one does) and she said that her philosophy was that sex scenes should be like songs in a musical. They shouldn't just be musically good/hot, they should also have a purpose in the story and further the plot. And this was a perfect example of that in action. So. Yeah.

Oh, in this fandom, any time I express anger it's because I love something more than I can successfully express (see: the sheer volume of obscenities I yell at Harry Styles through my laptop). So yes, I liked this quite a bit :)

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likecharity May 25 2012, 17:44:55 UTC
Yeah, that's a good analogy actually! I mean there's nothing WRONG with PWP, but I do find that the porny fics I most enjoy are the ones that have a bit more depth and feelings. And it seems to pretty much be the only kind I can write. I mean I guess the plot isn't so necessary, but you don't want to feel like you could just replace the characters' names and it wouldn't make any difference.

Haha, good, yay! And I totally understand that, I have been swearing at my computer more since getting into this fandom than I ever have in my whole life. :|

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dstylinson4 May 25 2012, 16:32:48 UTC
I can't.. this was just, fuck. so hot and omg I love you

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likecharity May 25 2012, 17:36:12 UTC
:D Thank you!!

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archylou May 25 2012, 16:36:39 UTC
Wow...I just cannot cope with your brilliant writing.

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likecharity May 25 2012, 17:36:28 UTC
Thank you! :D

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likecharity May 25 2012, 17:36:46 UTC
Yaaaay thank you. ♥

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