horizontal like a quarter to three. harry/louis, nc-17.

May 25, 2012 16:39

Title: horizontal like a quarter to three
Author: likecharity
Pairing: Harry/Louis
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Oh, god. Rough sex that is slightly D/s-y, unprotected sex, facefucking, breathplay, comeplay (including a facial), rimming, some pretty serious overstimulation, and a very brief mention of spanking. (Also Harry is seventeen.)
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kink: overstimulation, kink: d/s, kink: rough sex, words: 5-10k, kink: comeplay, rating: nc-17, pairing: harry/louis, kink: breathplay, kink: rimming

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cherrybina May 25 2012, 18:58:57 UTC
I THINK I MIGHT ACTUALLY DIE

dflkhfls so hot jfc

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likecharity May 25 2012, 22:14:29 UTC
♥♥ Thank you!!

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colazitron May 25 2012, 19:04:36 UTC
Ugh, yes. I feel like I'd be Louis, if given the chance lol. Um. Was that TMI? Sorry. This is just so, so hot and it's so sweet too with how careful Louis still is about everything and how obviously Harry is not the only one overwhelmed here. <3

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likecharity May 25 2012, 22:15:51 UTC
NOPE NOT TMI I THINK WE ARE ALL WITH YOU ON THAT ONE XD

Thank you, I'm really glad you liked this. And yeah, it was important to me that even though Louis feels like he's kind of losing control he's still making sure he has Harry's consent for everything.

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mowglimoonshado May 25 2012, 19:47:43 UTC
I think you killed me. ughhh. that was so damn hot. but their relationship was sweet too

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likecharity May 25 2012, 22:15:59 UTC
Thank you!!

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katey311 May 25 2012, 19:59:48 UTC
Stunning.

I always feel like I need to think about everything you write for a few days before I can write a proper response. Your comps are just so damned stellar I don't even know where to start..

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likecharity May 25 2012, 22:16:23 UTC
Eee, thank you so much! ♥

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imagination55 May 25 2012, 20:38:00 UTC
I feel like I want to cry your porn is so damn fucking amazing. I always feel like I'm cheating authors out of a 'proper' comment if I comment immediately with all my incoherency, but...yeah. I got nothin'. You're a porn goddess. AND THEN. You add in ~feels and characterisation and Louis blushing (wtf I didn't know I wanted that) and glasses and Harry being lazily enthusiastic and trusting and it makes your fic ten thousand times more brilliant. I am officially jealous haha (especially because I have semi-permanently lost my top!Louis and I cannot find him anywhere! /creys), but in a highly satiated way. :'D Great fantabulous fic, always.

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likecharity May 25 2012, 22:18:46 UTC
A porn goddess!! :') Wow, thank you.

I'm really glad you liked this and I don't mind the incoherency. XD I really love embarrassed!Louis because we see that SO RARELY irl. And I'm glad that this was all in character to you and stuff. And ugh I need to write some more bottom!Louis at some point, clearly we need to swap muses or something!!

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imagination55 May 25 2012, 22:44:56 UTC
I've had the phrase thrown at me, but I feel like you deserve it, so. Y'know. There's your new title lol.

This is so true. Probably the closest we ever got was when Boo Bear first happened. I can relate though because I rarely look like I'm embarrassed even when I am. Its a good cover. :p I just get even more giggly than I already am (which is a lot). The muses that are on holiday need to...I don't know, lose their luggage and be sent each other's by mistake. That was such a bad analogy LOL. And I just realised "analogy" has "anal" in it, heheheheheh. /is 12 years old. Although I need bottom!Louis for current stuff, so I'll take a rain check on the swap for now. :')

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