so soft it twirls. harry/louis, nc-17.

Jun 12, 2012 21:52

Title: so soft it twirls
Author: likecharity
Pairing: Harry/Louis
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Hair!kink involving Louis pulling Harry's hair and uh, maybe coming in it a little bit. Possibly kind of D/s-y but tbh I don't even know with these two anymore.
Summary: Maybe it has something to do with how pretty Harry's hair is, how it's basically his ( Read more... )

kink: hair, kink: d/s, pairing: harry/louis, kink: comeplay, rating: nc-17, words: 1-5k

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likecharity June 12 2012, 22:43:18 UTC
Eeee thank you so much. ♥

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likecharity June 12 2012, 23:29:01 UTC
Thank youuu! ♥ I'm really glad this felt emotionally-charged and gave you feels, because I kept thinking it was verging on being too PWP-y? I think the feelings come through even when I'm not aware of it, tbh, that's just how this ship is. I'm really glad you liked it! And that is a VERY GOOD TAG YOU HAVE THERE. I am def a fan of messing Harry up too.

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teaatsix June 12 2012, 22:06:40 UTC
Oh my gosh this was yet again flawless.

I think Louis actually summed this up for me: "God," says Louis in a small voice, "I didn't even know I wanted that."

No I didn't either, but I'm so glad I read this. It was beautiful and hot, I loved how it started so innocently but Harry just knew all along, but just let things run their course, and how natural it flowed between them, they were so raw and dirty one minute, then so tender the next.

But thats my favourite thing about all your writing the way you slip between the gorgoushotdirtysex and the feelings and dynamics that play out between them so seamlessly.

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likecharity June 12 2012, 23:30:47 UTC
Yaaaay thank you. ♥ I'm glad you read this too, and even more glad that you enjoyed it! My instinct was to go for it being Louis's kink originally and him getting Harry into it, but that's ALWAYS where I take things so I thought it would be fun to switch it up. I liked the idea of Harry knowing it was a thing for him. And I'm so pleased that the feelings came through, I wasn't entirely sure that they did in this one!!

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weaselzzz June 12 2012, 22:16:33 UTC
"God," says Louis in a small voice, "I didn't even know I wanted that."

Basically my reaction to everything you write.

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likecharity June 12 2012, 23:31:04 UTC
:D SUCCESS

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prmalscream June 12 2012, 22:27:51 UTC
Jesus. Fuck. I have words, but I am completely incapable of using them right now. Shit.

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likecharity June 12 2012, 23:32:16 UTC
I shall take that as a compliment! XD Thank you. ♥

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prmalscream June 13 2012, 19:58:20 UTC
I found my words. And imma apologize in advance for the word vomit to follow….I love the way you write them. I love the friendship and the love and the absolute desperate need they have for each other. I love the way Lou always takes care of him, and most of all I love how you show that while Louis may be the dominant partner, Harry is the one with the true power because it all means nothing if Harry doesn’t trust Louis to take of him on every single level. And that trust is just written in every single word and I love it so much because so many people don’t get that and….and….just you’re awesome. LOL

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