so soft it twirls. harry/louis, nc-17.

[likecharity]

Title: so soft it twirls
Author: likecharity
Pairing: Harry/Louis
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Hair!kink involving Louis pulling Harry's hair and uh, maybe coming in it a little bit. Possibly kind of D/s-y but tbh I don't even know with these two anymore.
Summary: Maybe it has something to do with how pretty Harry's hair is, how it's basically his

Comments

[meth_breath]

Hm. I don't think that thought has ever entered my noodle before. The idea that someone can like tearing someone down, and then building them back up again. I suppose that's what it IS to be a dom who loves their sub, and it's just. It's a completely lovely thought, with a sweet kind of truth to it. It melts your heart while simultaneously begging the question, "Bah, how have I never thought of this? This beautiful beautiful concept!"

In short (skipping the philosophical interlude), both you and this are awesome. :)

[likecharity]

I've thought about D/s a LOT but I've never quite considered it that way either, even though it seems sort of obvious once you think about it. And it just really seems to fit with Harry and Louis's dynamic somehow!

Thank you. ♥ I'm really glad you liked it!

[tracedust]

Ok so I got super excited when I saw you were writing this but omg it's actually so above and beyond what I was expecting. Like the end where he actually gets off with his dick IN Harry's hair, hnnnnnnnnng idek. ALSO it was so so hot how instantaneously the whole thing sets Harry off, and how Louis is just so like huh this is interesting let's see where it goes, like the amount of comfort they have with each other, it's hot as hell in this situation but also just really adorable. I think my favorite thing about your writing is how you can write super filthy porn and keep it so in character and feelings-y.

OK SO parts that stood out to me:

"What?" Harry is tranquil, maybe on the edge of sleep already, and it takes him a few seconds to understand the question. Louis is just starting to get impatient enough to clarify when Harry starts talking again. "Oh, the-hair thing? Yeah, like-" he clears his throat, "kind of. I mean like-no, not really, like-this is just nice, you know? Like, relaxing. So like this isn't really the thing..."HAHA

[likecharity]

Ugh, god, I love you, let me shower you with hearts: ♥♥♥♥♥♥ Grinning idiotically aaaall throughout this comment

[blackannis909]

That was great! :)

[likecharity]

Yay, thank you! :)

[memi2]

yes
that's all i even have to say
this is just
correct
100% A+ gold star yes

[likecharity]

:D Hee, thank you!! I'm glad you liked it.

[eviljellybean88]

lol yes louis, exactly, i didn't even know i wanted that either until i read it XD

but damn does harry have really magically awesome looking hair, i just love it

[likecharity]

:) I'm glad you liked it!