I apologise in advance for this incoherent and rambling comment but ..just wow. I actually feel like each story of yours has reached the absolute pinnacle of being realistic yet hot as fuck and then you go and kill that with another masterpiece such as this, I just cant even explain how much I adore your writing and there are so many specific lines I want to comment on but if I started would just be a copy+paste of the entire thing with (OMG!!THIS LINE!1!!!!11!!!).
oh god oh god oh god ohgodohgodohasfklm l;zsjfcnzlmdf z,xm kmskmskmskms seriously fuck I cant breathe with how much this twisted my heart around and that first part killed me and stabbed me in the face repeatedly with a pike and then this second part killed me again with how sweet and tender and loving everything was and it had me beaming and laughing and covering my eyes as I cried over the feels of it omfg.
Wow. I just joined this comm yesterday (or maybe Monday?) to read your existing fics and had not even commented at all to say hi because I'm sort of a lurker and brand new to this fandom, but oh wow. That was intense and amazing. I have learned from Louis and want to shower you with all the praise ever.
And now I'm off to find an appropriate 1D icon for future commenting purposes.
omg, there is nothing in this world better than this fic, save for the possibility that it is actually this way. If that makes any sense. I was thinking this morning, I bet Jenny's been working on something good. There hasnt' been an update in a while. Then the update message came through, and I couldn't get here fast enough. This does not disappoint.
There are so many things I want to comment on, but I'm just a big puddle of goo right now. Your writing is stellar, and it's as hot as the surface of the sun. Laced and loaded with love and emotions. Your domLouis is so amazing. A tweet from him came through as I was nearing the end, and I said to myself, yes sir! I really want to re-read and gather my thoughts on my absolute favorite parts! Thanks for writing, and for sharing! ~Jane
Thank you so much!! Yeah, I took a little longer with this one - though it was only about a week, I think, APPARENTLY THAT'S LONG FOR ME NOW - because there were so many complicated feelings and it was a tricky thing to try and get right.
I'm so glad you liked this and that you found it hot - I was sort of worried that Harry's uncertainty in the first part might turn people off from the sex completely, you know? Ughhh dom!Louis is my favourite. ♥
Harry's uncertainty in the first part was what made it hot. His uncertainty gave it an edge of reality, ya know? I mean that uncertainty, and the ever present need to please one's D, to never disappoint is the cornerstone of that kind of relationship, right? you wrote that perfectly, I mean, Harry soooo wants to please Louis, but with the reward of praise. But with D/s's, pleasing unfailingly even without praise is important too, right? oh, jeeze, I actually have no personal experience with D/s but I've read a lot of fanfic's about it. hahahaa, does that make me an expert?
I do think that you handled the uncertainty, and the way they worked out the limits and Louis' kinks perfectly. I love fics that illustrate character growth of some sort, and through the intimacy, your Harry and Louis do that individually and as a couple. Love it!
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I actually feel like each story of yours has reached the absolute pinnacle of being realistic yet hot as fuck and then you go and kill that with another masterpiece such as this,
I just cant even explain how much I adore your writing and there are so many specific lines I want to comment on but if I started would just be a copy+paste of the entire thing with (OMG!!THIS LINE!1!!!!11!!!).
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And now I'm off to find an appropriate 1D icon for future commenting purposes.
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I was thinking this morning, I bet Jenny's been working on something good. There hasnt' been an update in a while. Then the update message came through, and I couldn't get here fast enough. This does not disappoint.
There are so many things I want to comment on, but I'm just a big puddle of goo right now. Your writing is stellar, and it's as hot as the surface of the sun. Laced and loaded with love and emotions.
Your domLouis is so amazing. A tweet from him came through as I was nearing the end, and I said to myself, yes sir!
I really want to re-read and gather my thoughts on my absolute favorite parts!
Thanks for writing, and for sharing!
~Jane
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I'm so glad you liked this and that you found it hot - I was sort of worried that Harry's uncertainty in the first part might turn people off from the sex completely, you know? Ughhh dom!Louis is my favourite. ♥
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I do think that you handled the uncertainty, and the way they worked out the limits and Louis' kinks perfectly. I love fics that illustrate character growth of some sort, and through the intimacy, your Harry and Louis do that individually and as a couple. Love it!
~jane
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