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kotabear24 June 20 2012, 19:31:18 UTC
I'm just gonna be honest here.
I'm not an overly emotional person. At all. In fact, I'm pretty stoic usually.
But I actually TEARED UP. During the sad bit, when Harry was all sad and Louis felt like poop? Actual tears. In my eyes. One or two may or may not have spilled over. Eff you for that (except I love you and never just never ever stop ( ... )

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likecharity June 21 2012, 09:49:13 UTC
Thank you so much. It really means a lot that this made you emotional if you don't usually have that kind of response! Dom!Louis/sub!Harry is my favourite too - hahaha SURPRISE - and it was really interesting to explore the more psychological elements of it, I had all this headcanon about WHY they like it that way, and it's (sadly) quite easy to imagine Louis taking it too far at some point.

So glad you liked this. ♥♥♥

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kotabear24 June 21 2012, 22:21:04 UTC
Our minds should mate and have children.
Yes, I've thought the same things. I like to try to include a little bit of psychology, especially in my Larry fics, because I write so many of them and I feel like it'd be easy, if someone was just reading through them or something, to get characterization confused, yeah? I like to make them at least a little different every time.
Yeah man it gave me chills, not even gonna lie.

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yourgirlvivien June 20 2012, 19:39:58 UTC
I'm not even really in the fandom but I loved this. It was so complex and realistic and emotional .... not to mention hot. xx <3

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likecharity June 21 2012, 09:49:45 UTC
Wow, thank you for reading it even though you aren't really in the fandom! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. ♥

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aboutademongirl June 20 2012, 20:01:22 UTC
um. i... would say that i'll be in my bunk, but i don't think the bunk can handle me right now. kind of like the club. it can't handle me either. i'm just that overwhelmed.

this is so gorgeous, it's ridiculous.

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likecharity June 21 2012, 09:50:30 UTC
Ahaha, we should totally make that a saying. The bunk can't handle me right now. XD That is definitely a compliment, thank you so so much! ♥ Really glad you liked it.

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bb_blackbird June 20 2012, 20:34:58 UTC
Wow. Just wow. This is my favourite thing EVER.I t was dirty and rough but also so sweet and I loved guilty Louis caring so much about Harry. And Harry was the most adorable thing ever. I have no words to describe how much I enjoyed reading this.

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likecharity June 21 2012, 09:50:50 UTC
Wow, thank you so much!! ♥ I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

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harrysvcut June 20 2012, 20:46:15 UTC
I am speechless right now. Whenever you update, it's like Christmas for me and you never disappoint. Ever.

The way you write their dynamic is so perfect that it makes me understand them even more? Ugh. ♥

This was incredibly hot and full of feels and love, and there were angst moments (I cried when Louis left Harry askjhasdfjkd ;___; and then their conversation <3), basically this fic was the whole package. Loved it so much!

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likecharity June 21 2012, 09:53:26 UTC
♥♥♥

Thank you so much!! I'm really glad you liked it.

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