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[itwasrobby]

Here just to humor my brand new friends i wrote a poem:

My feet hit the ground in a rythmic form

The red streaming line of pain drops from my bleached lips

The ground beneath me moves with agility

Just a glimpse of your broken body touching the ground

The keen air flowing past my face is too much

The suffering cries haunt my head, invading my

Comments

[becoming_broken]

That's good.

I like it.

It's hot.

[harryismyidol]

i loved it! i already told you that but thats okay.

[consumedintime]

please tell me you wrote every other line! because every other line was depressing and had some tie to death or pain.

Hey Robby, can you bring my hat sunday. Thanks, see ya

[_remember_love]

hey robby it's ellyn. add me?
:-D