Hindsight (standalone)

[ivesia19]

Title: Hindsight (standalone)
Author: ivesia19
Rating: PG
Pairing: Dean/Cas
POV: 3rd limited (Castiel)
Summary: “Can you feel this?” he asks again, and the way he asks the question makes something shock Castiel down to his core, making him feel separate from this borrowed vessel.
Disclaimer: Fake. False. Fabrication. Fallacy. Other “f” words.
Beta: coffeshop-kites

Comments

[vasiliki]

I. Loved. This. I loved it! Some of my ideas about Castiel are the same as yours (alienated from his brethren, trapped between two worlds...)

[ivesia19]

Poor Cas is gonna have a hard time this season, but I love him!
Thanks for reading and commenting, bb :D

[angelshandprint]

*sags*
*drowns*
*sinks*
...
...

[ivesia19]

I hope that's good?

[angelshandprint]

Definitely

[ivesia19]

:D

[lilmissroadrage]

Oh yum~

That was. . .delicious. Very beautifully written, smooth, almost delicate, not too fluffy, but just right. :)

Added you to my flist, because I'm hoping for some more Dean/Cas from you? Hmmm? <3

[ivesia19]

Thank you!
And yes to friends :D
Hopefully, I'll be writing more Dean/Cas!

[choclitbunny]

“You’re not alone, Cas,” Dean says.

*____*

The simple yet entirely hopeless sense of loneliness you write Cas having is heartbreaking without going over the top. The idea of having no real home is a depressing one, especially when Cas used to have such a solid one. And the slow humanization process he undergoes is really interesting.

I really liked the dialogue. One of my favorite things about the show was how distinctly the main characters spoke. Dean with his smart-ass wit, and Castiel with his stiff, almost overly articulate manner of talking.

'Twas sweet and simple and I liked it. :)

[ivesia19]

I find the dialogue in Supernatural the most difficult thing to get right. Especially with Dean and Cas, I feel like it's easy to fall into caricatures.

But I'm glad you liked it! I'm always worried when I first start writing for a new fandom. I like to get a good grasp on the characters first.

Thanks for reading, bb ♥

[camui_zuuki]

That was wonderful, exactly like the others said... slow but with a beautiful rewarding ending <3

[ivesia19]

Thank you!