I'm breathless...this was so beautifully written. You really described their relationship so well; I thought it seemed very real, and I sort of know what it's like to be drained as Alvaro was. Thank you!
Hee yes, don't we all? Is a horrible way to be. Always hoping. Not being able to let go and just wanting to know why, why is it like this, will it ever change? Perhaps if I try just one more time...
Aaaw, this is so good, so very very good. Am already in love with it, the two gorgeous boys between heaven and hell. Love how you picture the two contrasting their differences. One so full of joy and light, being ever-present and missed when not there, and the other so void of emotion and dark, so insignificant that he is not missed at all, neither on the pitch nor on the ride home
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Paulo, to me, is the epitome of insignificant. Indescribably beautiful, and yet do people even give him a second look? No. Its all JT and Fatwap. Dumb and Dumber. Paulo is left in the cold. And, he is so blank, so very devoid, yet in a way he looks so much like our Sunny Alvaro. He wants not only to own that but to be it. His jealousy turns him into a monster, in a way, desperate to take, always to take, giving nothing but little sprigs in return. Kitten is the curious one, though, isnt he? Ever hopeful. Still waits to see if he can find something good (bit like our fic Kitten eh? Always looking for the good, ever patient) Slowly over time the light shifts. When one starts to shine the other dulls. The strain of a draining relationship just takes away the sparkle. Poor love.
No, no, logging evidence today. Lots of it. Lots and lots and LOTS of it. How are you?
Game tonight.You think there will be sunshine? *hugs*
Fatwap, hee. It is rather strange with Chelsea fans, no? They want the loud filthy English lads and don't care for their Southern beauty with its elegance and hidden charm. Though with Paulo it is very hidden, have to give them that. Glad that we have the sunny one, so glad. I like how he is so desperate in his actions, gives him a nice lively touch that otherwise would never come to the surface, it actually gives him life itself. Curious trusting Kitten, very fic Kittenish, yes. And I think the real one is like that as well. Very trusting at least, always looking for the good in people.
Who will be next? In your other comment you said you wanted to write Masche and Xabi. Is that secretive Xabi/Masche or sinful Xabi/Masche?
Hee, have no idea what logging evidence is but it sounds truly boring. Am currently proof-reading a paper from a friend and I have no clue about the subject. But other than that am fine!!:))
I truly hope there will be. He is not injured according to LFC.tv so he should be there. If not, am rather worried.
We used to call people that in school. Cruel, but true. Fatwap or Fat Walla. Indeed, they do. They want English. Full blooded English, at that. The fact that their English Rose (Terry) is a cheating scumbag and their Midfield Maestro (Fat Frank) is a slimy idiot does not matter.
Ah but he is by far their best looking player.
Love our sunny boys.
Life itself. Almost vampiric, that is.
The real one is lovely, aw. Hopefully. If he was a horrible bastard I would not look twice at him .
Secretive. For our Next Sin I want to do Torres and Gerrard. Pride, no?
It really is boring.Yours sounds much better. Mine is going to take days.
I am worried too, if he is not there. With Riise playing so poorly it would say a lot if he were to be left out.
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You know I love to read Paulo.
Paulo is a chasm of cold, hard barrenness whereas Alvaro is warmth, and fulfilment. Like blue and red.
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He wants not only to own that but to be it. His jealousy turns him into a monster, in a way, desperate to take, always to take, giving nothing but little sprigs in return.
Kitten is the curious one, though, isnt he? Ever hopeful. Still waits to see if he can find something good (bit like our fic Kitten eh? Always looking for the good, ever patient)
Slowly over time the light shifts. When one starts to shine the other dulls. The strain of a draining relationship just takes away the sparkle. Poor love.
No, no, logging evidence today. Lots of it. Lots and lots and LOTS of it.
How are you?
Game tonight.You think there will be sunshine?
*hugs*
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I like how he is so desperate in his actions, gives him a nice lively touch that otherwise would never come to the surface, it actually gives him life itself.
Curious trusting Kitten, very fic Kittenish, yes. And I think the real one is like that as well. Very trusting at least, always looking for the good in people.
Who will be next? In your other comment you said you wanted to write Masche and Xabi. Is that secretive Xabi/Masche or sinful Xabi/Masche?
Hee, have no idea what logging evidence is but it sounds truly boring.
Am currently proof-reading a paper from a friend and I have no clue about the subject. But other than that am fine!!:))
I truly hope there will be. He is not injured according to LFC.tv so he should be there. If not, am rather worried.
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Ah but he is by far their best looking player.
Love our sunny boys.
Life itself. Almost vampiric, that is.
The real one is lovely, aw. Hopefully. If he was a horrible bastard I would not look twice at him .
Secretive. For our Next Sin I want to do Torres and Gerrard. Pride, no?
It really is boring.Yours sounds much better. Mine is going to take days.
I am worried too, if he is not there. With Riise playing so poorly it would say a lot if he were to be left out.
Ai worried.
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