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Feb 20, 2008 21:01

Title - Wrath (4 out of 7)
Pairing - Dagger/Squirtle
Rating - NC17
Disclaimer - Not true. All made up.
Summary - There’s a fine line…

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hoppipolla February 21 2008, 04:07:36 UTC
I love our new boy with his shaved head and tattoos. So similar to Danny. I really loved this.

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ivorylasenza February 21 2008, 07:53:20 UTC
He is indeed. Am glad you liked.

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alejaboo February 21 2008, 07:58:24 UTC
veins like snakes underneath hot, clammy skin i likes the snake mentioning

thank fuck for the first fic with skrtl!, now more will follow hopefully
i was expecting a full fuck and i was curious about who will top, but i liked it much better this way

He’s pissing on his corners, here. He’s marking his territory. hihi
No words escape those lips; no prisoners, seeping through as they did with Agger. this was very beautiful
*i loves you*

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ivorylasenza February 21 2008, 09:44:15 UTC
Hee no, no, rarely do full ones. Before and after. Am no good with the actual event. Glad was okay though? <3

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x_hyacinth_girl February 21 2008, 09:36:18 UTC
Oh this is good, so so good. They fit together perfectly these two, the rough guys with a big heart hiding behind all their bravado, shaved heads and tattoos ( ... )

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ivorylasenza February 21 2008, 09:43:27 UTC
Hee aw. Glad you like. Still think Daniel is a bastard! Good to play with, though.

I like the idea of Skrtl being a sheep in wolfs clothing. Differentiates him from Daniel in that way. Looks similar but is nothing like him. His is not a conscious thing. Daniel is very preplanned in everything he does. In a way he seems kind of forced.

<3

Aw no Cillian. He really helped, no?

Could still be the wine if you are not used to drinking or something? Or perhaps the wine was dodgy. Talk to you later, hopefully.

Hugs

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nadi_wamos February 21 2008, 13:10:00 UTC
Wow, this is amazing.

Martin is eagerness; angel painted black.

Daniel is pure wrath. The hand of God.

Viking. Warrior-like. Blazing battles and lightening bolts and beams, beams of aggression seeping from every pore, from every movement. <3

His teeth are fury carved from ivory. guh I love your way of writing.

:D

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ivorylasenza February 21 2008, 15:44:49 UTC
Aw, fanx. Glad was not shite.

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nadi_wamos February 24 2008, 16:31:19 UTC
Your work is never shit! :(

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magic_beans February 21 2008, 17:08:26 UTC
Oh yes. I like your Dan so much. Fierce little bastard isn't he? Just almost totally how I see him, not interested in having pretty hair or whatever, but step on his toes and he'll come after you with everything. And the suggestion of the similarities between them but also a lot of their differences, it's very clever. Martin as Dan a few years ago, I like that. The opening speech from him was very Agger-like, when Dan came he talked about how his aim was immediately play in the first team, yet I can imagine that he must've had similar doubts to Martin as to whether he was actually better than Sami. And as you see Dan in Martin you get the idea that there was once maybe a Martin in Dan, that Dan reacts against seeing a vulnerability in him as it smacks too much of past vulnerability in himself, but maybe that's me taking it a little too far ( ... )

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ivorylasenza February 21 2008, 19:05:25 UTC
He indeed is a fierce little bastard. Suit him more than naive child, no?

I was looking at pictures of Skrtl on google yesterday and he seems to have followed a lot of Daniel's style patterns. Spikey hair, blonde highlights. Virtual mullet. Short, short, and then shaved.

Yet, something about him screams softness, and i cannot explain what it is. He looks like an angry fuck but I cannot help but think that he is probably a gentle monster, you know?

But, you are indeed perceptive. I often think that Daniel might be the type to totally rebel against seeing someone with his own vulnerabilities. He might think that smacking it out of them would be like smacking them out of himself. Is like self punishment but with the benefit of deflecting onto somebody else.

Sex without sex.

My fave thing.

<3

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magic_beans February 21 2008, 20:29:03 UTC
Yes. Freshly shorn head for his move to us, it seemed to me. Like he saw pictures of Dan and thought hmm, and copied him. I wonder if Dan has noticed? Hah. If he and Martin ever play together in the center, which I'm sure they will at some point, that will be something to stare at!

Yeah there is something a little vulnerable about him, especially looking at older pictures of him. He has very thin, in some way almost feminine lips I think. Was watching clips of him against H&W on YT today and when he's on his back with his head in the medical guy's hands he looks a lot less fierce, a little worried actually! He also has the skinniest arms ( ... )

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ivorylasenza February 21 2008, 21:11:19 UTC
New start. He actually used to be very pretty and young looking. His lips are downturned. If they were upturned, they would be girlish, very pretty. Something that would look perfect wet, glossed or bleeding.

I look forward to the foreign twins in central defence!!!

He has the vulnerability that Daniel never had, and I like that. I like that he looks like such a tough, evil bastard yet he does not look unpleasant or arrogant.

Oh he actually looks dazed, lost, a little scared, very submissive to help in that clip. Have you noticed that when he gets injured he looks like a frightened little boy? Daniel just looks angry.

Indeed. He does not like the thought that he was once that way, too, a little unsure, a little out of place. If he can wipe the look of fear or discomfort off another persons face then in some way he is wiping it off his own.

He might be the abused turning the abuser in that perhaps Sami did that for him when he first arrived.

Took him aside.

Stole his innocencer, per se.

Aw thank you dear <3

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