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Mar 08, 2008 09:20

Title - Sloth
Rating - NC17
Pairing - Daniel Agger/Martin Skrtel (my new ‘thing’)
Disclaimer - Never happened. Possibly never will. Probably never will.
Summary - Part 6 of 7

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magic_beans March 8 2008, 14:09:53 UTC
Oh Christ. Dammit. Really this? Wow.

Dan fucking around, pretending to sleep. Martin trying not to wake him. The accusations of laziness over learning the language. Everything. This is something near actual perfection. The submission from Martin is hot as hell, and Dan is just perfect. So outraged that he had to touch himself, that Martin wasn't there to satisfy his needs. And the beginning and end, the gentleness Martin has for Dan despite everything else. It's the consensual-ness of it that really gets me. The way it's all so fucking kinky and they both love it. The way that although Martin might want something soft from Dan he can't deny that he likes being thrown around. Consider me slain, really.

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ivorylasenza March 8 2008, 14:18:43 UTC
Haha. Well, we are a bit addicted to them, no?

Daniel, I think, would see it as absolute outrage, having to sort himself out. Surely he has servants for that? Surely he has people who are made to service him?

Masturbation is an insult to him, these days!!!

Yeah there is a consensualness that perhaps should not be there. Yet, when there is an understanding between the two in such a relationship then consent is always there.

Daniel, after all, need not force anybody. He is persuasive enough as it is!

Our imperfect Martin does look the type to want to be flung about. He allows himself to be photographed whilst being tattooed and, look at him. He does not even flinch.

He enjoys it.

He wants it.

He wants Dan in any way he can get him and, in their own ways, they are both lazy. Can imagine them just lying in a bed scratching each other until they bleed almost unconsciously.

I like them, I do.

<3 Glad was okay. I had a boring morning, as you can see. Was up at 7, wtf,and there was nothing on the telly!!!

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magic_beans March 9 2008, 21:53:51 UTC
We are indeed! But what better thing could there be to be addicted to?

Dan he cracks me up a bit here. You have to love him for the confidence. He can carry off being such an arrogant wanker somehow. Perhaps because he has probably fought for the right to be called one. Perhaps because he is indeed so persuasive!

I like the consensual aspect of it very much. The way it is master and pet, dom/sub, whatever, but not so clichedly, not so lamely. It fits. It suits them well. The fact that it is not so neatly explained, that Martin himself is a touch unsure of it at times, makes it good, hot.

Yes, actually can imagine the way they would look eye to eye and then press their nails into one another and see who blinks first. Could imagine Dan deciding not to permit Martin to leave the bed at all, playing with the idea of just having him there to fuck when he pleased, and Martin being too lazy to resist. Too enjoying of the attention, maybe.

I wonder if Martin would ever win one of their little battles though. If he would ever end up on top

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ivorylasenza March 9 2008, 21:57:38 UTC
He enjoys the title. It absolves him of the need to actually treat people properly!!!

Can imagine him keeping Martin handcuffed to the bed for a whole weekend, not even letting him up to use the bathroom. Just because he can. And, Martin fucking hates him for it, but at the same time he loves it because it proves just how "wanted" he is.

Haha too lazy to resist. Oh I adore him you know? I realise there is something terribly imperfect about his face but I find that beautiful.

I think he would. But the irony would be that is because Daniel wants for it to be so. So, he is not really on top. He is just playing in the master's hands.

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tie_dyed_vision March 8 2008, 16:09:06 UTC
Well what a nice half-time I'm spending, reading this and looking at your spam, which I'll be commenting on in a second...

"Good," he says, finally, when he feels as if his skin might bruise. "It's good, Daniel."
It's good to be dragged in, thrown against the wall and then pulled downwards for a gentle fuck.
It's good to be rewarded for the effort put into asking for what one wants.
It's good to be Daniel's...
ooh, the sense of possession and consent in this one was fantastic!

Also, this one was nice because usually Martin/Danny ends up being so violently angry! Which is fine in small doses for me, but it seems to be all he's getting lately, and Martin really looks so sweet that I hate to see that happen to such a character...and then my mind starts turning 180s and sending him over to Alvaro for some cuddle time.

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ivorylasenza March 8 2008, 18:58:55 UTC
Le Spam was fun to create. They just do follow a pattern, even down to injuries.

Martin and Danny just look violent and angry and they work well that way. But, here, Daniel was just too tired and lazy to make an effort!

I think that Martin would only tolerate cuddles for so long before he began to suffocate and choke and claw his way out of them

<33

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ivorylasenza March 8 2008, 18:56:01 UTC
The strongest man was just too lazy to make it difficult so he went with nice. Kind of implied that it would not be all the time.

A surprise, so to speak. Marty liked that.

I loved him today. I wanted him a fair bit, as usual.

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choccies March 8 2008, 18:49:10 UTC
Absolutely perfect.

As always your fic is mind blowing with it's spot-on charaterization and kind of... lyrical wording. I loved it and want to thank you a million times over for being a very pleasant break from the sudden influx of bad-fic.

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ivorylasenza March 8 2008, 18:53:23 UTC
*blushes* am I evil if I say I never read fic any more because of badfic?

Glad was okay. I do realise that Le Fandom is kind of difficult

<3

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iamyourmind March 8 2008, 19:21:06 UTC
A mind blowing piece, this is. Your characterization of them is spot-on, exactly how I imagine them being together. The thing about Daniel I liked best in this is that he's almost insulted he had to masturbate, when he can have people like Martin to do it for him.

Into my memories.

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ivorylasenza March 8 2008, 19:27:42 UTC
Haha yeah well, why should he do it himself when he has someone else? He sees Martin as an extension of himself, as much 'his' as his arm is

<33

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