not afraid to fall [chapter 13]

Apr 20, 2012 04:24

Title: not afraid to fall [chapter 13]
Author: ivoryroyale
Genre: supernatural, hurt/comfort, friendship, romance
Rating: PG
Summary: in which a group of six aren't afraid to stand tall because they have each other. 
Note: 4,249 words. Unbeta-ed.
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[prologue] [chapter 1] [chapter 2] [chapter 3] [chapter 4] [chapter 5] [chapter 6] [ chapter 7] [chapter Read more... )

!series, member: daehyun, member: youngjae, genre: friendship, series: not afraid to fall, fandom: b.a.p, member: yongguk, member: zelo, genre: hurt/comfort, genre: supernatural, genre: romance, member: jongup, member: himchan

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noxiouscherries April 20 2012, 11:39:58 UTC
Spooooot. 8D

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noxiouscherries April 20 2012, 12:16:18 UTC
Youngjae. Just. Bb, let me love you rn. ;A;

LOL Daehyunnie. That is adorable. 8D Jongup is adorable. Daehyun is adorable. @o@

Omg, it's banghim talking through the door. Eep. kjndajs

"Himchan isn't here right now, please leave a message."

I LOLed at this, seriously. XD

"I know... But can't I just take care of you forever?"

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He loves everything about him.

He loves Yongguk.

Loves him, loves him.

*insert more incoherence*

LOL I actually had to read this twice since the first time I was being an overexcited kid who forgot to turn the music off so that she could concentrate. Also, BAP's new hair just kept popping up in my mind, my spazzing interrupted my flow. Anyway. XD

Omg, dude. I was flailing so much by the last part. jahsbdhjadbsjabsd Yes, you love each other so much. ;A; ;A; ;A; Everyone knows. ;A; ;A; ;A; Like love love each other. ;A ( ... )

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ivoryroyale April 23 2012, 02:06:12 UTC
Oh, I know I'm making Youngjae angst a lot. Lol. I was going to make Youngjae stop suffering so much in later chapters but because of someone coughcoughkiwi_ismcoughcough I'll probably be writing more hurt!Youngjae. Sorry! But not really cause you like angst.

Lol. Daehyun and Jongup are just cute little puppies right now. xD

I told you I was going to write BangHim talking through the door!

I imagine Himchan would actually do that if he was mad at someone and didn't want to talk to them. Lol.

-v- I love incoherence. :3

Lol, you silly goose. And OMG, YES. Their hair is so ajsfhkjashfk. *-* Especially Youngjae's!

I'm glad you liked the BangHim enough to flail. :> And almost everyone knows. Yongguk is still as dense as ever. xD

Oh, yeah, there is definitely going to be a lot more jealous Youngjae. Jealous Youngjae is significant to the story, actually. So, yeah, you can expect more of him. :)

And no, it didn't! Your comment was amazing to read! :L I loved it and you, but you already know that. <3

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ivoryroyale April 23 2012, 02:06:09 UTC
Yes, camp is done. lol. I can reply now! xD Thanks for reading btw. :>

Lol. Don't worry! I'm used to you being a dork. LOL. I kid. Yeah, I posted a bit too early in the morning. xD I gave people in certain time zones a disadvantage. xD

CRYBABY JAE IS NOT YET GONE. THERE WILL BE PLENTY MORE FOR HIM TO CRY ABOUT. NOTHING IS WRONG WITH ME. Bl I just couldn't handle making him cry so much at once. orz Watch, I'll make him cry a lot; you'll see. And then Zelo will see the amazingness that is crybaby Jae.

Lol, you really are. xD I've never seen a girl want their bias to cry so much. xD

But but Jongup is the crybaby! D: But, yeah. I'm making him sort of one dimensional, I guess, right now. Hopefully his character will change later in the story. xD And Jongup is more attracted to Daehyun in the romantic sense. He just thinks of Zelo as his brother. Lol. And rofl at Jongup reproducing asexually. I would want a clone of him. orzI love that you skim over all the BangHim. xD I kind of want to start the YoungLo early just to see how you'd ( ... )

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numptysmeg April 20 2012, 12:58:53 UTC
BUT IT'S NOT SUNDAY!!!

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numptysmeg April 20 2012, 13:21:25 UTC
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numptysmeg April 20 2012, 13:44:01 UTC
Ok, I liked the Younglo and the Daejong and there's so much fluff in this from the puppy couple and parental couple but...

THE BANGHIM TOOK THE FRICKING CAKE, JERKED OFF OVER IT THEN ATE IT. (omg that sounds so gross >.But but but but but but but but I loved it. The arguement through the door and Himchan being able to tell Yongguk's every move was so sweet. It really reinforces the whole knowing each other so long and better than the back of their own hand thing ( ... )

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ivoryroyale April 23 2012, 02:05:49 UTC
LOL. Yeah, I posted early. Because of camp. xD I didn't want to make you guys wait too long, just in case I didn't come home on time, so I decided to post before I left. :3 I hope that's okay~

Your keyboard smashing is A+! x)

"THE BANGHIM TOOK THE FRICKING CAKE, JERKED OFF OVER IT THEN ATE IT. (omg that sounds so gross >.<;;)" o.o LOL. Yeah, that sounds a little weird. xD But I'm glad you liked the BangHim! :3

I'm glad I was able to reinforce that! That was probably the whole reason I made them talk through the door - to give a slight sweet moment where you can see their relationship and how strong it is. So I'm glad you liked it! :D

Himchan has to be strong in times like this. He has to show Yongguk who's boss. xD Lol, and you can never use 'and' too much, in my opinion. <3 I use it all the time, in case you didn't notice. xD

Lol, you discuss my story with other Ivy? xD And yeah, Yongguk still has a long way to go compared to Himchan. Lol. He'll figure it out eventually though.

"I've re-read the part from Yongguk talking about ( ... )

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shadow_fictions April 20 2012, 13:18:01 UTC
OI OI OI BUT WHY ARE YOU POSTING SO LATE./ EARLY. oh ok, camp. forgiven. :| (have fun bb ♥ )

HIMCHAN. HIIIMCHAAN. Congratulations on realising your damned feelings.

And yay! Slightly happier happenings! :3

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ivoryroyale April 23 2012, 02:06:05 UTC
Lol. I thought it was a good thing that I was posting early. xD I didn't want to keep you guys waiting all that long and I already wrote up the chapter, so it wasn't really a big deal. :) I'm glad I'm forgiven. xD (And I did, thanks! <3)

Lol, took him long enough, huh? xD

Yeah! Yay for happier feels! \o/

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byakuya_777 April 20 2012, 14:00:18 UTC
Oh, things are starting to fix, slowly, but it´s taking shape.
Girl, you made me tear up again with this: "Of course, he loves Yongguk. He loves his voice, husky and rough; he loves his smile, gummy and large; he loves how protective he is all the time, loves how stupid he acts sometimes, loves how hard he tries, how long they've known each other, how he pouts when he's really sad, how he can stay up with him all night just talking to him.
He loves everything about him.
He loves Yongguk.
Loves him, loves him."
OMG Himchan LOVES Yongguk, like in ROMANTIC LOVE, he KNOWS it; now I need to know if Yongguk is also conscious about his feeling for Himchan, but let me tell you, THIS IS KILLING ME, that just one of them is aware of his feelings and tries to play it cool just... ;~;
I liked the chapter, it was fluffy, but then... Banghim do something!!!!

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ivoryroyale April 23 2012, 02:06:02 UTC
Yeah, things are starting to fix, yay! \o/

I made you tear up? D: Like, sad tearing up or happy tearing up? 'Cause if it's sad tearing up - I'm so sorry! ><

Lol. I'm glad you liked the chapter!! :) BangHim is developing slowly~ I'll for sure have them do something later on in the story! Haha. ^^

Thank you for reading bb! :D

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