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ivoryroyale

not afraid to fall [chapter 21]

Jan 17, 2013 01:17

Title: not afraid to fall [chapter 21]
Author: ivoryroyale
Genre: supernatural, friendship, romance, hurt/comfort
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: language
Summary: in which a group of six aren't afraid to stand tall because they have each other.
Note: 6,907 words. Sorta unbeta-ed.
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member: daehyun, member: youngjae, genre: friendship, series: not afraid to fall, fandom: b.a.p, member: yongguk, member: zelo, genre: hurt/comfort, genre: supernatural, pairing: daehyun/jongup, genre: romance, member: jongup, member: himchan

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ivoryroyale January 17 2013, 09:21:00 UTC

kiwi_ism

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ivoryroyale January 18 2013, 07:18:45 UTC

aww, what happened? :( though i'm happy i was able to cheer you up. \o/ yey.

of course. idk, i imagine him like that. trying to butt himself into other people's business and what not. he's such a little devil. xD although he's probably not really like that irl.

I WAS TRYING, SO YEEEEY. I WROTE BETTER YOUNGLO FLUFF. \o/
and i'm sorry. but younglo is coming. very very soon. and it will be amazing. hopefully.
and yeah, junhong liked jongup before. that's why he was all moody when jongup came to visit him.

...maaaaaybe. >.> :P

ivoryroyale January 17 2013, 09:21:19 UTC

noxiouscherries

ivoryroyale January 17 2013, 09:21:33 UTC

lhlarsson

lhlarsson January 17 2013, 18:19:00 UTC

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ivoryroyale January 18 2013, 07:18:50 UTC

I LOVE YOU TOOO. >3

D: i hope that isn't you curling up and dying. i wouldn't want that to happen. liiiiiiive!

thank you so much for reading. ^^

ivoryroyale January 17 2013, 09:21:47 UTC

tikibuddy91

*SCREECHES THE SCREECH OF IMMEASUREABLE HIGH PITCHED FREQUENCIES* tikibuddy91 January 17 2013, 13:50:12 UTC

AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHLSKJDHFLSJKDNCLSDJLKSDJNLCKJDFLKNSDCJNSLDFJ

OKAY so I woke up at 4:30AM a bit dazed b/c i went to bed at 9PM (which is wayyy too early for me to sleep but since I was a bit ill and had been busy these past few days that I didn't get much sleep, I took the time last night to sleep more) and I went to the kitchen for some water (why do I need to tell you this? LOL). But yeah, later, I was thinking since I saw your tweet about this chapter last night "I wonder if she updated...." just as I was about to join my laptop in bed (LOL)...and when i checked my email, lo and behold:

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Re: *SCREECHES THE SCREECH OF IMMEASUREABLE HIGH PITCHED FREQUENCIES* ivoryroyale January 18 2013, 07:17:58 UTC

LOL, i know, it took me a while. xD gosh, this chapter gave me so much trouble. i wanted to finish it on monday, but then school got in the way. and then when it was tuesday i like, had only one paragraph left to write, but then i read it over and was like nonono and seriously rewrote the whole thing and it was just tiring, lool. i'm glad it's over with. xP

i think that everyone can agree with daehyun that banghim/yongchan should just get together already. xD soon. it is coming. and the confession will be huge and tearjerking, i swear.

OMG those cats are freaking perfect and precious. ;A; yes, they totally represent younglo. totally. because they are cute and adorable and perfect.

i've never watched dream high. xD;; but i'm glad you thought that the confession was cute. ^^ (confession via paper is always one of my favorite things to read, so i wanted to include it in the story. xD it's just so precious and adorable.)

LOLOL, omg, that brown puppy is like eating the other one. which one is daehyun and which one is jongup? xD

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tikibuddy91 January 18 2013, 07:42:17 UTC

It'scomingsoon?!SOSOON!? WHAT. Dude, areyoulikesomekindofmyclonetwinoromsehting. 'Cause I kind of made Himchan a tearjerker in the next chapter when he confesses to Yongguk, he was just emotionally overwhelmed with his feels for the guy that he even called Yongguk a selfish bastard for taking his heart in the first place when it was supposed to belong with his girlfriend. LOL. (ohsnap.) Yongguk doesn't cry, but he feels moved by Himchan's confession. OKAY YEAH I NEEDA STOP. But I don't think yours would run along the same lines, LOLOLOL just wow because your Yongchan has so much of a deeper sense of friendship behind that bond, so much past and deep stuff.

You didn't watch Dream High? dang, well still. Post-its are one of the sweetest things ever in history to exist. :P

LOLOLOL IKR. THAT BROWN PUPPEH. PLANTING HIS MOUTH ON DAT BRACK PUPPEH. /flails on chair. It's up to you, though I'd feel that Daehyun is tan and Jongup black, but in your story, it could look like Daehyun's the black one and Jongup's the tan one. ;w ( ... )

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ivoryroyale January 17 2013, 09:22:26 UTC

fussiegoss

awildneko January 17 2013, 16:29:38 UTC

HHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEE I LOVED THE CONFESSION DSJFDNSKJFNDSKF CAN SOMEONE CONFESS TO ME LIKE THAT?!! It reminded me a little of Love Actually, and that is one of my favourite ways of confessions; written down and of course accompanied by FOOOOOOOOD. I was actually wondering when they would run out of post its XD ( ... )

ivoryroyale January 18 2013, 07:18:44 UTC

I KNOW RIGHT? dude, if someone did this for me i legitimately would love them forever. and omg, Love Actually. i love that movie. so freaking cute. written confessions and food = best combo.

i try to give them negative qualities as well as positive to make them more dynamic. jongup's negative trait just so happens to be selfishness. xD can't really blame the boy though; he's terribly spoiled in my story. :P and yes, younglo~ i'm so excited to start writing them tbqh. i've been waiting forever to actually start developing them seriously eeeee //excited shipper is excited

youngjae's just plain awesome. i imagine him being a hopeless romantic irl, so since he's got his super brain, of course he's going to able to come up with brilliant ways to confess. <3
and perhaps it will.

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