(un)expendable [2/2]

[ivoryroyale]

Title: (un)expendable
Author: ivoryroyale
Pairing: Daehyun/Youngjae
Genre: angst, romance
Rating: PG-15
Warnings: sexual situations, alcohol, mild violence, mentions of bullying, character death
Summary: Youngjae's an undercover cop. It was supposed to stay that way, but then Jung Daehyun happened.
Note: 11,431 words. Because Minnie has amazing

Comments

[hanabi_tales]

Ahh I just don't know what to say, breath taking. I was glued to the screen the whole time. I woke up at like 7 something this morning and I've haven't moved since, It's like 8 now lol. What can I say I like to take my time when I read.

The story was so well put together and so thoughtful, I damn neared cried at the end.The DaeJae thing was kind of hot too lol I don't know why a lot of people find it hard to put those two together, they're hot XD

Anyways thanks for the update I'm anticipating the next one. Look at me I'm all excited *jumps up and down*

[ivoryroyale]

oh, i know the feeling. i love taking my time when i read a fic. i reread parts and take the time to catch my breath or squeal or whatnot, depending on what fic it is. xD

i'm glad that you didn't cry. ;-; lol, idk, i write angst and then am sad if people cry from it. xD
omg, writing the drinking scene was probably the hardest part for me. orz i was blushing the whole time i was writing it. .-.

haha, aww, thank you for reading~ ^^
<3

[hanabi_tales]

I think you should write more DaeJae! Just saying though that's my own personal request ^^

I was so touched I reread it twice already.I just love emotional things I'm such a sap XD

I can't wait for leh next update no matter what it is I'm probably gonna end up rereading it anyway :DDDD

Much,much love <3
~Hanabi <3333

[ivoryroyale]

hahah, i definitely will. xD i have two oneshots planned out for them already and one drabble; i just need to find the time to write them. ;; i always take soooo long. orz

O-O you read it twice? omg, ily~ sitting through my writing two times lol.

ugh, you're such a sweetheart. ;-; thank you so much, hanabi! <3 hahah

[awildneko]

I'M SO GLAD I TOLD YOU TO WRITE WHICHEVER IDEA YOU WANTED.

This was just full of feels ;A;

He and Daehyun had this connection from the start, from the first time he even looked at the photo and heard his voice and oh the fact that Daehyun knew all along :O

And I love the way that Youngjae has a comeback about Zelo being a fetus (because he is lol) and Zelo's annoyed face I can just imagine how cute it is.

And the way that they invite Jongup to stay up late with them sometimes is just awesome, because I often think of them as the three musketeers
(either them or Banghimup)
Actually that's quite an interesting fic prompt, to have the three musketeers sticking together always in their friendship, and then two of them getting closer to each other and leaving the other alone and bitter - tension galore I say!

And I can totally imagine Channie the mechanic :3

And Youngjae being a fail at the gym and Yongguk laughing at him

But yes I'm glad you wrote this, though it's sad too.... ;A;

[ivoryroyale]

;__________

[closet_childx]

OMG. YES. COULD YOU PLEASE WRITE THAT SEQUEL?
THAT WOULD BE SO INTERESTING. IM REAAAAALLLY CURIOUS ABOUT THAT.

PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE.

[ivoryroyale]

<3
okay, i'll work on it when i have time. ^^

thank you for reading btw~

[blurrrylines]

OH MY LORD LET ME JUST LEAVE A LONGASS COMMENT FOR MY BABY IVY AND HER SPLENDID WRITING ;A; <3
okay wow what do you mean you didn't do the prompt justice YOU GAVE IT LIFE AND PRETTY MUCH WENT ABOVE AND BEYOND GIRL.

okay first off oh my GOD i love the pacing of this, ugh made me feel poor youngjae's broken heart ;__;
the treadmill part LOOL omg that was brilliant and the best part is i can imagine yongguk actually doing that, laughing at him but being nice about it at the same time lmaoo

and ugh the family dynamic is all there, so sososo bap. i think that's their most winning quality and your fic really captures it

BUT THEN YOU ADD THIS NOT-SO-PG-RATED SCENE:

So, because he's drunk, Youngjae says, voice low in his throat, "I dare you to take off the shorts," eyeing Daehyun with dark, dark eyes

[ivoryroyale]

;uuuuuu;
i'm so glad that you liked it omg i'm gonna cry orz

it would totally happen. i seriously cannot imagine youngjae on any type of machinery without being a total dunce about it, i really can't.

I DIDN'T MEAN TO ADD THAT PART I SWEAR IT JUST SORT OF HAPPENED. OTL
i'm glad that you liked the daejae though ;A; /glomps
i was seriously so worried i was writing them out of character or something throughout the whole thing

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING ;_______; words cannot explain how happy i am that you liked it.
YOUR PROMPTS ARE AMAZING OKAY. TOO AMAZING TO PASS UP
I WILL ALWAYS WRITE ANYTHING FOR YOU OKAY <333333
-ivy aka minnie's faithful follower lmao

[blackheart_lies]

Just bloody amazing and i just can't quite breathe right now. Omg.
Every single thing you've wrote (that i've read) is good but this was just perfect and it all locked together so damn good and have i mentioned that you are amazing?! Omg, you are so amazing!
This was good DaeJae and i'm so picky with this pairing but you ticked all the boxes and yeah, amazing.
And the humour! I love how you managed to throw some fun in it.
Yeah, really really really liked this ^^

[ivoryroyale]

;^; i'm sorry i caused you respiratory problems orz lol jk
but really omg thank you so much. you are amazing too okay for actually liking my writing enough to say such great words /throws flowers at you because so amazing
it was so hard to write daejae. i'm picky too about them tbh. i rewrote some of the scenes so many times because i didn't like their characterization or i thought they were too ooc; i'm glad they turned out okay. ^^
haha, gotta throw in some jokes. xD idk, that seems to be my specialty, throwing in jokes when you least expect it lol
thank you so much for reading! :) <3

[blackheart_lies]

*catches flowers and puts in a vase* Thanks!!
♥

[ivoryroyale]

oh i know. my stomach had a giant empty hole in it while i was writing youngjae's death tbh. ;-;
thank you so much, bb! <3 i'm glad that you liked it! :D