the shortcomings of being Moon Jongup

Mar 31, 2013 00:33

Title: the shortcomings of being Moon Jongup
Author: ivoryroyale
Pairing: ot6, slight!Jongup/Zelo, Daehyun/Youngjae, and Yongguk/Himchan
Rating: PG
Genre: hurt/comfort, friendship
Summary: Sometimes Jongup forgets Junhong isn't bulletproof.
Note: for bictory at thebrowniebunch fic exchange! I'm so sorry you got stuck with me. I wasn't sure if you wanted an actual ( Read more... )

genre: hurt/comfort, pairing: jongup/zelo, genre: friendship, fandom: b.a.p, !oneshot

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matokii April 1 2013, 19:25:41 UTC
Omg this is so cute, i'm drowning in rainbows ;;
I really loved everyone's characterization <3 Especially the maknaes, they are impossibly adorable~ I could picture perfectly each scene in my head. *o*
Junhongie being always there for Jonguppie and Jonguppie learning to return it is so precious and perfect and very like them. ♥
And I also loved the others' interactions. DaeJae was just priceless xD
Thanks for sharing this amazing story!

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ivoryroyale April 2 2013, 22:23:09 UTC
i always have so much trouble with the characterization, lol. b.a.p is so complex, but i'm glad that you loved them!
but omf, while i was writing i just imagined junhong doing this for jongup in real life and i nearly melted from how cute it was. i never knew maknae line is so fun to write. ;-;
pffft, daejae is always priceless tbh. especially daehyun omfg.
thank you for reading! i love seeing you comment~

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matokii April 3 2013, 02:20:01 UTC
wow, but your stories always ends up having amazing characterization!
maknae line is really fun to write, maybe because they interactions with each other are always very sweet. they are really close and just give a biiig aura of cuteness around them. it's so much fluff material, i can't <33
daehyun bothering jonguppie, especially about the boyfriend thing made me squeal and laugh so much. jonglo is so obivuous to everyone, except to jonguppie and junhongie xD
and i love seeing your fics ♥

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jaedaed April 2 2013, 11:26:27 UTC
ivy this is so cute alakdjdklaakdkldsksjlskd waiting for a younglo one shot HA HA HAHAHAHAHAH ♥

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ivoryroyale April 2 2013, 22:24:18 UTC
haha, thank you! i'm glad you thought so! <3
i'm working on a younglo oneshot right now! about ties, lol. xD i don't know when it'll be done though.
thanks for reading! :)

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jaedaed April 8 2013, 15:18:14 UTC
do you know who i am tho hahahhahahaha guess ivy guess

cant wait for your younglo

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ivoryroyale April 8 2013, 22:42:51 UTC
lmao idk who are you???
psst i'm not good at guessing things

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tikibuddy91 April 3 2013, 03:10:32 UTC
HOO HOOO~ LOOK WHO DROPPED IN SO LATE, WOMAN. OH TEA 'ELL. OH T'ELL. 'OT'ELL. HOTEL. (lolwutwasdat...ide...) orz~ (wait that looks so wrong, it's like I have a tail..................or some tilde-y gas. ROFLMAO)

UH. *breath hitches as I type* ANNYEONG? O~O;
(like jonguppie here)

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tikibuddy91 April 3 2013, 03:14:34 UTC
It should probably offend him, but it doesn’t-not when he’s already misplaced one of Himchan’s hair clips and two of Yongguk’s favorite pens for drawing. (They told him it was okay and that they’ve already replaced them, but he still feels a little guilty for it.)
bb, jonguppie bb, donchu worry 'bout a thang. you're the 2nd youngest, not the 2nd eldest.

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tikibuddy91 April 3 2013, 03:19:05 UTC
He forgot Junhong could be this naïve.

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tikibuddy91 April 3 2013, 03:30:02 UTC
Junhong sighs, and Jongup hates the look of disappointment on his face. Like he prides himself in being the first one Jongup wakes up, but he nods anyway. “You go first. I have to pick out your…” The rapper trails off. Rubs his eyes to sees what Jongup’s wearing and furrows his brow. Jongup can’t help the smile on his face. With a scratch of his head, Junhong climbs down his bed, purses his lips, and continues, “Well… okay, I have to pick out my outf-”

“Nope. Not today. That’s my job. You are going to eat and then you are going to do nothing.”
WARMING THE KOKLES (cockles) OF MY KOKORO.

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i_luv_tvxq August 26 2013, 15:32:12 UTC
*squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee* I was grinning so much thru out this, and all the cute just killed me everywhere <3 junhong being so in tune to jongup, whilst jongup is all flustered and lost about junhong... •///•!!

the touches of banghim and daejae were awesome too :3

such a little gem of presh this fic is <3

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sparkzmxzxz July 24 2014, 14:33:59 UTC
literally spazzing on twitter as i read this asdfghjkl jonglo is the sweetest thing ever ;--; so cute argh i love jonguppie and ofc i love junhong and this just made me love them a bit more ;A; their relationship is seriously the sweetest. i'm glad that they have each other, really <3 :")

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