The Best Thing: Part 2 of X'traphia's journey

[ivy_pool]

I rushed through the fields up to our house, and then slowed down inside. First, I went to the map room. I dug in a pile of dusty old maps my father had marked as useless, and found the one I was looking for. I didn't look at it yet, but continued to my mothers jewelry box, where I carefully took a small velvet box. Then I rushed to my room and

Comments

[m_malcontent]

In real life I am trained as a high school English teacher. You write better than a lot of High School Juniors can manage. Congrats

[eternal_ot]

Wow! Wow! Wow! This is superb! I would love to read about this world even after Idol minor is over. Amazing work. Kudos! *Claps*

[murielle]

Oh! Oh! Oh! This is so exciting! What a wonderful story. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I loved the bit about the map transforming, and the elk/goat creature talking, but I am a little worried a out her going off into the night...alone. Well done, ivy-pool!

[bewize]

What an adventure! I look forward to seeing what happens next. Glory is a pretty awesome character.

[bleodswean]

This is a fantastic adventure! It's exciting and full of imagination. I really liked how you had X'traphia pack food for the journey!