Monster Story: X'traphia's Sword

[ivy_pool]

My name is X'traphia. My family are goat farmers, and we move a lot. On this particular move, we had gone to the coquina mountains, where we had found a large herd of goats. One had even become my pet, Glory the goat. I was homeschooled, and was very small for my age. I was 11, and was about as small as an average 3rd grader. This was because I was

Comments

[yamyam_kat]

That was a very interesting story. I liked it. I can't wait for the next part!

[eternal_ot]

Well done. Looking forward to more . Loved the world you have created. Kudos.Cheers.

[bleodswean]

This is very exciting! I like how clearly you drew a picture of the gragan with words!

[murielle]

What wondrous adventure are you taking us on,Ivy-pool? Lead on! I can't wait to dis over what you have planned for us. So much to love in this story, a goat becoming an elk, a magic compass and a sword that turns into a shell. Marvelous!

[favoritebean]

This was lovely, and I cannot wait to read what comes next. It reminds me of the misadventures of Hiccup and Toothless from the How To Train Your Dragon books (not the movies), and the Princess in Black series. The latter always features a goat or two, and the former features epic battles inside caves at one point.

Great job!

[clauderainsrm]

Don't mention Toothless to my dog, that's her arch nemesis!