Night, the Beloved Chapter Four

Jan 23, 2010 01:16

Chapter Four - Secrets

Our road is long
Your hold is strong
Please don't ever let go

I know I don't know you
But I want you so bad
Everyone has a secret
But can they keep it
Oh No they can't...

Secret - Maroon 5

Instead of going to eat lunch I headed back to the sanctity of my own home. The ride on the subway was nerve wracking as I sat there wondering, ( Read more... )

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fffriction1984 January 23 2010, 19:41:31 UTC
*clears throat* your chaptes are too short. Everytime you get into the plot your chapters are already over T.T I want mooooooooore T.T

But why the hell is someone with an anxiety disorder in a metropolitan like Tokyo?! XD At first that sounded a little like an oxymoron to me XD

Yay for the update though! :3

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ivyfallsdown January 23 2010, 23:47:52 UTC
Well I figured she had certain triggers and a change of scenery might have helped her get out of her previous situation that set off her anxiety.

Also, sorry for the short chappies ^^;

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tbsupervillains January 24 2010, 13:29:02 UTC
True, now that I think of it, it does make sense. Feel free to ignore my comment on that then. XD

~fffriction

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eye_dentity February 10 2010, 21:44:16 UTC
I really like your story. I hope you continue it.

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ivyfallsdown March 18 2010, 09:26:12 UTC
Thank you very much! I've been very busy as of late so I haven't exactly had much time to work on it. :)

Expect the next chapter very soon!

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