Comments | iwantpie: Fic: For He's A Jolly Good Fellow (Dean) R 1/1

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Fic: For He's A Jolly Good Fellow (Dean) R 1/1

Jan 18, 2010 13:52

Title: For He's A Jolly Good Fellow
Author: iwantpie
Words: 3232
Rating: R for language
Genre: Gen, angst
Characters: Dean
Warnings: Adult language. I gave it an R rating just to be safe because I dropped the f-bomb a few times.
Disclaimer: I own nothing and Kripke owns my soul.
Summary: Pre-series. A hangover and self-reflection do not mix.

A/N: Set ( Read more... )

fanfiction: supernatural

Comments 44

deathtakes1 January 18 2010, 19:03:18 UTC

amazing fic ♥

iwantpie January 18 2010, 19:26:21 UTC

Thank you!! :D

borgmama1of5 January 18 2010, 19:05:59 UTC

Oh. Poor Dean.
This:
"Dean knew deep down that he was a tad jealous of his little brother. He didn't bear the same weight that Dean did. Sam could love them and understand that they were a family but he never understood how tentative a hold you could have on those you cared about, despite of and because of their line of work. He never had to experience losing anyone. Sure, Dean was grateful Sam was spared that hurt but maybe if Sam had shared that pain with him and their dad then he would get it."

How down must Dean be feeling to see this.

I really loved the 'slice of life' feel to this, just having Dean's reactions to the girl and the waitress, nothing happening with them, just living his life.

Your really describe this place physically and emotionally very effectively.

iwantpie January 18 2010, 19:31:03 UTC

Thank you, my dear! :D I originally started out writing a humorous piece about his birthday that was set before Sam left but my fingers had other ideas. LOL I'm really glad it turned out better than what I expected and I'm glad you liked it! <3

borgmama1of5 January 18 2010, 19:45:40 UTC

Ha, I know all about the boys taking you in a different direction. I started writing a little meta piece about birthdays and am 4500 words into a Weechester story I never intended to write!

iwantpie January 18 2010, 19:48:25 UTC

LOL Happens to me with every fic. Meant to be really short time fillers and they kind of blow up on me. I can't wait to read it! I love pre-series stuff, if you haven't noticed. ;)

justmyb0nes January 18 2010, 19:24:55 UTC

as always your writing is awesome. And dude, you know how dean's mind works.
The end is perfect. It's all sad and beautiful in the mean time.

iwantpie January 18 2010, 19:32:53 UTC

Dude... stfu I love you. LOL *hugs* Is it weird that I can write guys better than I can write women? I has a guy brain! LOL Anyway, thank you! *spins you*

I barely spell/grammar checked this so I hope there aren't a lot of mistakes! LOL

justmyb0nes January 18 2010, 19:39:49 UTC

stfu?
nope it's not. Not for me. I always understand guys better xd
you're welcome!

I don't know. I suck at grammar xd

iwantpie January 18 2010, 19:47:09 UTC

"shut the fuck up". I meant it in a nice way though! XD
In RL, guys still boggle me but that's because they aren't a tv show that I can study. LOL

I did a spell check but I always miss grammar somewhere. I didn't want to go over it again. LOL

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essene January 18 2010, 20:00:24 UTC

I loved it, it's a wonderful character study. Dead on.

iwantpie January 18 2010, 20:23:49 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it! :D

blubird_pie January 18 2010, 20:13:32 UTC

The whole morning-after beginning amused me far more than it probably should have. Poor Dean! Thanks for posting =)

iwantpie January 18 2010, 20:24:28 UTC

LOL See, that was all the fic was supposed to be about but my fingers took off after that. Hehe. I'm glad you liked it! XD