Comments | iwiwal: The Origin of Sin

iwiwal

Jul 12, 2006 01:15

Title: Sister Named Desire
Rating: PG-13, pretty tame for Lust
Characters: Lust, Father, and Pride
Words: 601
Notes: This is an original take on the creation of Lust from the manga.

( 'Man is not meant to be alone,' he proclaims, piercing young Pride with a stare. )

Comments 5

raptorscribe July 12 2006, 06:32:39 UTC

Very nice. And so wonderfully true to the character as well. ^_^ I think you pretty much nailed Father here, and Lust is spot on. Good job,

iwiwal July 12 2006, 06:39:30 UTC

Thank you. ♥ I'd be worried if I didn't get Lust right. XD;;;

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iwiwal July 12 2006, 06:43:15 UTC

Thanks, yuuo. ♥ ♥ *Hugs!*

imperfect_path July 12 2006, 06:49:49 UTC

This is quite delicious. A lovely fic job, dear. Truly fitting for a creature personifying Lust.

man_of_means July 12 2006, 09:24:58 UTC

Nice!