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iwontbedenied

(Untitled)

Dec 11, 2005 21:44

TITLE: Evil
RATING: er...R?
DISCLAIMER: Don't know, didn't happen. Clearly.
A/N: Be warned, it ain't pretty.

( Rosemary. Heaven restores you in life. You're coming with me through the aging the fear and the strife. )

Comments 10

trendy_rocker December 12 2005, 06:49:48 UTC

YOU KILLED PIERRE!!!!

Good for you.

That was really dark. Awesome job. I love what you said about Chuck, and I love how you made David and Pierre mortal enemies. lessthanthree

iwontbedenied December 12 2005, 07:20:33 UTC

I did kill Pierre. I was gonna write Chuck giving himself the axe, but I couldn't figure a good angle to write from. And if I ain't feelin' it, it ain't happ'nin'.

...Coughs. Forget that that was a total lie, please.

It was pretty dark. I wrote half of it before my day went straight to hell and right around the time Pierre started being like 'I HATE DAVID' in the story was where I had picked it back up in my thoroughly bad mood. Have you noticed that someone's died in my last three works? I may be fixated.

trendy_rocker December 12 2005, 07:24:48 UTC

As long as all your killing is done with words, dear.

purrfectworld December 12 2005, 06:57:20 UTC

Holy shites. Eerie.

iwontbedenied December 12 2005, 07:17:42 UTC

See this is what having Untitled stuck in my head for hours does to me. It makes me kill Pierre.

trendy_rocker December 12 2005, 07:23:39 UTC

I found that funnier than I probably should have.

iwontbedenied December 12 2005, 15:22:42 UTC

I've shown similarities to a character in one of your stories. Hm.

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aliciabouvier February 2 2006, 01:30:23 UTC

Wow! I liked it mainly because I have felt the same on days. Days where I just wanted the pain to go away. I came close to slitting my wrists once but I couldn't do it. The sad looks on my friends faces just played over and over again in my head. I liked it and yes it was dark.