(Untitled)

Jun 15, 2006 01:57

Title: Running from the Rain
Author: the lovesongwriter sings...
Pairing: Pete/Mikey
Rating: PG-13y
POV: Pete's, 3rd person.
Summary: Pete returns to New York to find the boy who got away.
Disclaimer: Not real, don't sue.
Author Note: 1737 words. Finished on June 15, 2006. The song Mikey is singing at the end is called Porcelina of the Vast Oceans by the ( Read more... )

Leave a comment

Comments 20

inpurity June 15 2006, 21:52:22 UTC
I have been steering away from MCR fiction lately and having a deep dislike of Mr Wentz I almost give this a miss and it would have been a tragedy, because this is excellent. Beautifully written, mature and with a slick and svelte change in scenes that it is almost cinematographic.
Excellent job, plus that song by Thursday is beautiful.

Reply


noisyhearts June 15 2006, 23:17:15 UTC
um, words, words, come back words.

I like it. Kind of a whole lot.

Reply


ghostaeroplane June 16 2006, 03:04:02 UTC
Finally a fic. :) Naw, worth that wait, I agree too. It was good, you know, I like how Mikey and Pete have the whole "hurt", "not working out" relationship in this. It was good to read.

Reply


astaria51 June 16 2006, 03:18:10 UTC
Oh, flail and ashfs and a lot of other letters. I don't have anything good to say, my feedback sucks. This story is rainy and quiet and so are the boys, even if they don't want to admit it. Owie.

On a side note - for some reason a few lines of dialogue sounded somewhat English-accented to me (you are one of my few US friends, no? wtf? where is my head tonight?) but given that it's, well, Mikey, it didn't break the story at all for me.

Reply


crossyourself June 16 2006, 04:06:59 UTC
i love this and you. you make me hurt for pete in ways that i shouldn't. awfff. <3

Reply


Leave a comment

Up