*HOWLS* MAN, HOW DID YOU KNOW I'D COME TO READ THIS?!?!?! >8D of course i'm going to read it ma cherie (kk ;]) you'll never escape me on lj! muahahahahaaa
i LOVED it! it's short but sudden and intense and full of emotion~ SO much better than those typical scenes that show the exact same thing in an mv~ *ahems ahems*
He walked past her, looking as if he never met her before.
She desperatly tried to grasp on to something: a smirk, a blush in his cheeks, a twitch of his lips.... Something......something that would indicate she wasn't drowning.
Loosing sight of what was ahead of her.
But he erased all hopes in one move.
^ I love how they're not full sentences, but fragments of what really counts. Makes it really poetic :D
The flirting at first, innocent but insisting. The game that soon followed, dangerous but thrilling and the ultimate choice that she was unable to make.
*grins* again, i like that 'flow' of the 'innocent but insisting' and then 'dangerous but thrilling'; the repeat of "___ but ___ing" was nice
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA I told you I couldn't get pass the ELLE Girl interview! I swear it's incripted in my mind foreeeeeeeeeeeveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrr XDDDDD Damn stupid boy with his low voice! ^w^
HAHAHA probably! XDD It really did pop up in my head, so I had to write it down, exam or not ^___^ Thank you soo much for taking the time to read and comment! I really can't thank you enough for that. ...*blushes* you really think so? Omo that's so nice of you to say, and I hope that one day I'll be as good as you.......but that won't be before a loooooooooooooooong time! But you're too nice just to say this, and give me a LOOOOt of strengh to continue.....i feel less of an idiot for posting with you always around telling me this! Thank you very very much really <333333 *Runs and glomps you!* *Sending you changmin chocolate chips* *HUGE HUGSSSS*
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i LOVED it! it's short but sudden and intense and full of emotion~ SO much better than those typical scenes that show the exact same thing in an mv~ *ahems ahems*
He walked past her, looking as if he never met her before.
She desperatly tried to grasp on to something: a smirk, a blush in his cheeks, a twitch of his lips.... Something......something that would indicate she wasn't drowning.
Loosing sight of what was ahead of her.
But he erased all hopes in one move.
^ I love how they're not full sentences, but fragments of what really counts. Makes it really poetic :D
The flirting at first, innocent but insisting. The game that soon followed, dangerous but thrilling and the ultimate choice that she was unable to make.
*grins* again, i like that 'flow' of the 'innocent but insisting' and then 'dangerous but thrilling'; the repeat of "___ but ___ing" was nice
She was willing ( ... )
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Damn stupid boy with his low voice! ^w^
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Is this nightmare thing in the ending inspired by your exam?lol
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It really did pop up in my head, so I had to write it down, exam or not ^___^
Thank you soo much for taking the time to read and comment! I really can't thank you enough for that.
...*blushes* you really think so? Omo that's so nice of you to say, and I hope that one day I'll be as good as you.......but that won't be before a loooooooooooooooong time! But you're too nice just to say this, and give me a LOOOOt of strengh to continue.....i feel less of an idiot for posting with you always around telling me this! Thank you very very much really <333333
*Runs and glomps you!*
*Sending you changmin chocolate chips*
*HUGE HUGSSSS*
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