therealljidol week 16: thunderclap

[j0ydivided]

I knew, on our first date, that I was going to marry you someday

Comments

[alycewilson]

I was right there with her as she moved through these emotions. Well done.

[j0ydivided]

Thank you. :)

[swirlsofblue]

This is so incredibly evocative, and real and raw, sorrowful and bittersweet, beautifully told.

[j0ydivided]

Thanks!

[bleodswean]

I really liked the way you introduced each new "phase" of her romantic life. Dry and yet deeply emotional. Nice job.

[j0ydivided]

Heh, thanks. :)

[marlawentmad]

Oh, this is so powerful. The voice, the slow unfurling, the painful twist, the slow plod of moving forward.

[j0ydivided]

Thank you.

[dmousey]

Was not expecting this to be fiction! It has such a personal feel to it. Well done. Shows how much you pulled us all in! Thank you for leaving us with hope for Jane's happiness. Hugs and peace~~~

[j0ydivided]

Thank you! I wanted to end it on a high note -- glad it worked for you.