therealljidol week 18: the distance between us

May 18, 2017 14:29

This is an intersection with fodschwazzle. His piece is here. The pieces may be read in either order.The gate opens when the ice melts. We can feel the shift, a day or two before it happens, down in the village -- a warming of the air, and the quiet creaking of the ice in the mountains, under its load ( Read more... )

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roina_arwen May 22 2017, 05:02:50 UTC
A gorgeously crafted story, and a lovely intersection. <3

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eternal_ot May 22 2017, 11:13:39 UTC
Aww <3 Beautiful. You seriously are great with love stories. What a wonderful piece! Great Job!

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murielle May 22 2017, 12:30:27 UTC
I just adore this story! Both stories! Please tell fodschwazzle, I can't comment on DW. Your stories work so well together. Brava! Brava!

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halfshellvenus May 22 2017, 20:39:12 UTC
These two stories were lovely companion pieces for each other. I'm glad I read the other one first, as knowing how kind the people were on this side of the gate would have spoiled the sense of terror the people on the other side have for this world!

I'm glad things worked out for both Will and Willow, and that they will live out their days in a world much nicer than the one he came from.

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flipflop_diva May 22 2017, 21:56:06 UTC
Awwww, I love this! Your pieces together are so sweet and so much fun too. I read yours second, so I knew there was a happy ending coming, but it was incredibly enjoyable to read it from Willow's perspective.

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