1+2=1 (Part One)

[j_d_miranda]

This is the first part of Gabriel's story, so it introduces alot of characters. Please read and comment.

Comments

I like

[perfectvictimv2]

I really liked how you introduced Gabriel. I got the idea that shy was a shy girl that really just wanted to find something but was not so sure herself what she wanted to find. I feel like Gabriel lives in a small town and goes to a very small school where coming out would be a bad idea and that not a lot happens in the town. It was very well done and I really got pulled into it. You made it seem peaceful and true. Just one easy going life so far, can't wait to read whats next.

Re: I like

[j_d_miranda]

Yeah, Gabriel's not exactly sure about anything yet, and [i]a lot[/i] of people whould be ... unaccepting if she told anyone but her close friends that she is gay.

Thanks for the r&r. i hope the story wasn't to hard to follow. I do my best work at 2am...sadly.

But I had alot of stuff that I wanted to get across, and it all kind of came at once.

The next part should be up .. soon i hope. =)