I loved your story! I'm always a fan of murder mysteries, and this one was wonderful. I liked how you kept the UST going without letting it overwhelm the story. Jim was anxious about his relationship with Spock, but always put the job first. Brilliant twist at the end too.
Excellent read. Thoroughly enjoyable. Extremely well paced. The dynamic between each and every one of the characters was well rounded and complementary.
Spock... what can I say. 5 stars, go to the top of the class.
This is incredible. You have every element a murder mystery needs with a very tastefully developed romance on the side. I enjoy how you used the transporters - I didn't figure out the orange on my own, so that was super exciting to find out. I also enjoy Spock's protectiveness, and the final solution of the Romulans. Great job
I LOVE a good murder mystery, and this was a damn good murder mystery. I thought the twist at the end with the Romulans was great, as well as just the sheer attention to plot detail. The central Kirk/Spock relationship was great as well, but it took a backseat to the main plot, and rightly so because what a fantastic plot it was. Amazing job.
This was amazing. What a great whodunit! Your supporting characters were drawn so well they all came alive (er....and then died)within the limited text dedicated to them. I am impressed. Hee...and I love how Spock wasted no time jumping from "you want me" to "let's do it." Thank you for sharing.
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Spock... what can I say. 5 stars, go to the top of the class.
Thank you.
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Hee...and I love how Spock wasted no time jumping from "you want me" to "let's do it."
Thank you for sharing.
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