please correct my English grammar

[nagacat]

I finish writing a short fan-fiction in English. But English is not my native language. And so I'm needing help for grammar.

This fiction is football slash (RPS, but I think this is PG rating), and this has about 1350 words.
I really need a help for only grammar and you never need any knowledge about football.
I write that fic (in this post) in

Comments

[whitesongs]

-- One day, Per dreamed of two beautiful butterflies. -- 全然OKです

[nagacat]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you said my English is good, because I don't have any self-confidence of my English ability. I was really lazy student in a high school. And so now, I try to learn English again with repentance...

And...
This is the 1st part of that fiction, and that fiction has 2 parts. So, if I can get your permission, can I post another part of it to here? If you have time and can correct again, I want to ask you for it.

Anyway, thank you so much again!!

[whitesongs]

You're welcome. =) Aw, you should have more confidence in your English; it's very good! I can understand it perfectly fine. When you say you didn't study in high school, does that mean you're teaching yourself now? If so, you're doing a really great job.

Posting the second part here should be fine. I'll check it if you do. ^^

[nagacat]

Thank you so much